Moment of Winter Twilight
Spread
your arms mighty oak,
like
my father and his before him.
In you, I’m in their arms wrapped
In you, I’m in their arms wrapped
warm
in a shawl of blue-cream
fringed
in white powder. Amber-glow
softens
the rough-edged tree-line.
In the seam of time between night
and day, this twilight moment unveils
In the seam of time between night
and day, this twilight moment unveils
a
vacancy long denied: the embrace
I
never knew, like a puzzle-piece
put
in place by nature’s sleight-of-hand,
a
timely fit; this grown man now complete.
Ekphrastic poem read at Lemont Art Center,
March 2015.
After
retiring from a 48-year career in the printing industry in 2013, Michael Escoubas
began writing poetry for publication. His study of and interest in poetry goes
back some 30 years. During this time he studied classical and modern poets
learning from their works and from critics who comment about them. Michael
writes poetry in part because his mother once said, “You have a gift for words;
you should do something with that gift.”
Michael,
ReplyDeleteA perfect ekphrastic poem! I can picture that tree in m y mind, which as you know, that is what that type of poem is supposed to do! Welcome to Whispers!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thank you David for your gracious comment on my poem.
DeleteIt is nice to have a friend already in Whispers.
Michael
Dear Michael,
ReplyDeleteIt is so good to see you already have a comment on your heartfelt poem. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you Karen.
DeleteIt is an honor publishing in Whispers.
Michael
Michael, you do indeed have a gift for words. Your poem encompases all the senses and human emotions brought on from the beauty of the gloaming...my favorite time of day! This is brilliant! I wish you a Mele Kalikimaka! Aloha, Connie
ReplyDeleteConnie,
DeleteSo nice to meet you in Whispers and thank you for your gracious comment on my poem.
Blessings,
Michael
Moment of Winter Twilight is a beauty of a poem, Michael. I especially like "In the seam of time" and how " the twilight moment unveils a vacancy long denied" and then that embracing ending that makes a "grown man complete." Your poem makes the reader complete. Congratulations on a fine piece of work.
ReplyDeleteJo,
DeleteThank you for commenting--feel especially blessed when a poet of your stature makes an observation. Isn't it wonderful being in this marvelous Whispers community? I'm already thinking ahead to February which is my earliest eligibility to offer a follow-up poem.
Blessings,
Michael
Hello Michael. Welcome to Whispers and thank you for sharing such a delightful and fun poem. Continued blessings!
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