DESPAIR
From night: dark, black,
dawns: the light.
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SPRING
Come day: warmth, white,
blossoms: at play.
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PASSION
From love: lust, pride,
nothing : can hide.
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3 ‘kuhlman's is a form I derived from the sonnets of Quirinus Kuhlmann
(1651-1689) famous sonnet Love-Kisses XL1.The 'kuhlmann' is a short verse form
of two phrases, interspersed by three related monosyllabic 'stem
words'(nouns,adjectives etc) , separated by commas, between the 'colons ' to
form a phrase therefrom.It has One word integral title. Here are my 3
'kuhlmann' for your consideration.
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Brian
Strand has created short poetic forms including 'broken monoku' (a haiku
variation) and 'footle' (a trochaic monometer with witty, topical, etc themes)
and Captioned Cartoon, an Ekphrasis combining his art and poetic interests. He
has published a seven kindle ebook series Poetic forms; A Strand of Verse;
My Choice Strand Verse; A Strand Guide; Christianity Explained; A Strand
critique; and Captioned Cartoon Ekphrasis. Brian has written nearly
200 Amazon reviews and is a Wiki poetry and art editor.
Brian, Great work..Good contrast within the lines..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
ReplyDeleteStruggling with these I have to say. Thats because, I was an instant covert to the 'broken monoku' and 'perfect six', no doubt!
ReplyDeleteWill get there! Best wishes Ralph.
Ralph, Think of a the 7 word kuhlman as a 3 lines displayed as one line .line 1:word 1/2 :line2 words 3/4 relate to word 2:line 3 words 5/6/7 .
ReplyDeleteThank you, you have been helpful. My favorite is Spring :-) All the best Ralph.
DeleteThank you Sara for your kind words.regds Brian
ReplyDeleteHello Brian. You continue to amaze me with your poetry knowledge and creativity. I have enjoyed your latest creation that you shared with us. Continued blessings!
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Thank you Maurice, along with my wife,my Lord, poetry and art is my passion, and hopefully my innovations can encourage others tobexplore their God given giftings.Christmas greetings to you and all whisperers.rgds Brian
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