"Autumn
Skin"
By Ken
Allan Dronsfield and Blanca Alicia Garza
"My
beautiful lady with Autumn Skin;
do
not be ashamed of the marks
that
time has left upon you.
Look
deep into the mirror;
You're
still beautiful; you're still fire.
burning
with intense desire.
Your
body once was Spring,
then
Summer, and now Fall;
but
there's still passion
in
your body and soul.
You're
skin still gets goosebumps
with
a gentle touch.
Look
into the mirror once more;
You're
beautiful; such fire; such desire.
My
beautiful lady with Autumn Skin."
passionate write - she'll still be beautiful when she has Winter skin
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Jack,
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A beautiful love poem. What affirmation.
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Jo,
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I guess my note didn't got through. The affirmation in this poem is lovely.
ReplyDeleteWhat woman wouldn't want to hear that! Thank you for posting this poem.
Thank you again Jo,
DeletePassion on fire-beautiful
ReplyDeleteBlanca and I thank you.....
DeleteHow gorgeous! Thank you both! - Laura M Kaminski
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Nicely written and a great cooperative work, enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks from us both Gert ...
DeleteLovely poem of assurances and reassurances!
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DeleteKen & Blanca
Pleasantly warming, just the poem for a winter evening.
ReplyDeleteSuch kind words, thank you so Raamesh!
DeleteKen & Blanca
well done, happy hew year!
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DeleteKen & Blanca
Thank you, Isha, for the following--
ReplyDeleteAn unusual tribute presumably to a woman who is loved. Difficult to imagine a woman writing this for a man! This would have to be a couple who deeply love each other and see beyond the downside of aging so in that sense it is a fine poem and congratulations to the poets for expressing something that many would hesitate to write.
Yours sincerely,
Isha Wagner
Isha,
DeleteOur sincere thanks for your critique and understanding of the premise for our poem...Thank you for enjoying it...
Blessings,
Ken and Blanca
Ken and Blanca,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very touching and moving poem. Welcome Blanca to Whispers!
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Beauty is only skin deep but character goes all the way to the inner being..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
DeleteDavid,
DeleteMany thanks for your kind words,
Blessings,
Ken & Blanca
Sara,
DeleteSo very true indeed, glad you enjoyed our poem....
Blessings,
Ken & Blanca
Thank you so much for the warm welcome David Fox.
DeleteBlanca Alicia Garza
What a lovely poem to read and enjoy. I like the important message and sensitivity shown. Well done
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DeleteThank you for your kind words and for enjoying our Poem....
Ken & Blanca
Dear Ken and Blanca,
DeleteThank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us. It's a timeless message, one people should focus on more. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you both enjoy your time spent here and that you continue to share your words in the year to come.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you so much for the warm welcome and opportunity to post our work on your beautiful page. Blanca and I will be sending more pieces in the future both as Collaborative efforts and single poems as well....thank you again to the Whisper's community.....Happy New Year to all,
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Ken and Blanca
The image "autumn skin" is succinctly beautiful! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks from Blanca and myself. We enjoyed writing this one...very happy you enjoyed it!
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