Sunday, November 3, 2013

Water--By Audrey Haick--United States


Out of the vastness of void
He called water into being
And as the first rain drop formed
Suspended before her Master’s eyes
Arrested by the sight of his brilliance
She captured a portion of spirit divine
His beauty, glorious and incredible
Found her delirious with joy!
And amidst the vacuous silence,
Her eternal song arose
Echoing throughout the deep
A solitary sigh of ecstasy; ascending
Reaching a thunderous roar…
She'd ride the four winds forever!

Audrey, a.k.a. Annalise Brigham resides in beautiful Maryland, U.S.A. A Mother to one amazing daughter.  She's also a published author and loves writing and reading poetry.


  1. Wow! Audrey this poem of the creation of water is one of the best personification poems I've ever read. I also interpreted the drop of water as a symbol for man. What a blessing to be created in the "Master's eyes." Awesome writing, dear friend. Love, Carolyn Devonshire

    1. I'm smiling! Glad you enjoyed this, dear I've told you how I got inspired. Yes, it is blessing that he chose us! Thank you for your love and support and encouragement. Much love, Audrey

  2. Hello Audrey. This is a completely wonderful, descriptive poem, I am following the raindrop on its journey upon the four winds. I really enjoyed reading this. If you do not mind, I would like to invited you to consider submitting some poetry to my poetry publication, Creative Inspirations, please. Karen writes a wonderful column for me and the many readers who enjoy her work. You can get more information by visiting: Thank you again for the blessed poem, "Water." -MJ

    1. Hi Maurice, Thank you for your kind comment and the invite to post on your web site. It will be an honor. I am so glad that you enjoyed, "Water"! It is one of my Favorites. Sorry for the delayed reply... have been very busy but will definitely make time to read more and visit!

  3. Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--

    beautiful write

  4. Audrey, a truly lovely and creative poem describing God's handiwork. Thank you for sharing.
    Love, Chalene

    1. Thank you very much, Charlene! I really appreciate your kind comment and encouragement! Love, Audrey

  5. Wonderful expression - giving one something to ponder. Enjoyable reading this morning. Keep your poetic pen flowing...

    Rhoda Galgiani

    1. Thank you so much Rhoda! I'm glad that you are inspired by "Water". It is one of my favs!

  6. Dear Audrey,

    This is a wonderful poem so rich imagery and personification a lovely write! Welcome to Whispers and it is so nice to read your poetry again. I hope to see more of your poetry here in the future.

    Sandra Stefanowich

  7. Hi Sandra, Thank you for your kind comment on "Water" and also for the warm welcme to WHISPERS!

  8. Dear Audrey,

    Thank you for all the encouraging comments you left for other writers today. What a blessing you are. It is people like you that make this site possible. Have a good week.


  9. Thank you, Richard Sponaugle, for the following comment--

    Extremely inspiring from start to finish and a great last line.