Tuesday, March 15, 2016

From the Archives—Artistic Views—Featuring Ali Znaidi—Tunisia, Robert P. Hansen—United States, Ralph Stott—England and Jim Teeters—United States

I enjoy delving into our Whispers’ archives to read gems from past issues.  Poetry is a form of art and as such the visual presentation matters.  Interesting spacing, creative titles, stanza breaks as well as other elements go into the decision of which poems the reader will be drawn to.  Yet, visual experiences aren’t about a haphazard placement of words on a page—all elements should be part of conveying the message.  The poems by Ali, Robert, Ralph and Jim are artistic experiences from talented writers. I thank them for choosing our online journal to share their gifts.

Sincerely,

Karen O’Leary—Whispers’ Editor

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The Shape of Inexistence

By Ali Znaidi--Tunisia

When the night comes
existence takes the shape
of inexistence for those
who have no home
but the streets’ laps,
for those who queue,
           as usual,
waiting for new sorrows,
       & above all,
for those whose morning
is not yet to come.

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Leftovers

By Robert P. Hansen—United States

rag doll
    —mauled—
         squeaky chew toy
      puppy love
yips
      yaps
            growls
                      barks
       wagging tail
sloppy tongue
  
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Broken monoku--form

By Ralph Stott—England

..........a tulip's petals close
..................a man writes by candlelight
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a man sleeps alone.......
.......heads full of crowds

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Fallen Leaf

By Jim Teeters—United States

When I step off
the spinning wheel
my future flashes before me
holds me captive
must find my center
shake myself free
need to be a
            fallen leaf
still
            ready
for God’s breath
to whisk me
where I need to go

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12 comments:

  1. Wonderful visuals. Thank you all for sharing your amazing talents.
    Sincerely,Charlene

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    1. Dear Charlene,

      I'm so glad you enjoyed these poems by our talented friends. Thank you for the bright light your are in our writing community.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  2. extremely artistic set of poems!

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    1. I agree, Sheikha! What a joy to share the poems by our talented friends. Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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    1. Hi John,

      I agree! It is good to share the talent of others and celebrate their gift of words.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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    1. I agree, Peggy! What a light you are here at, Whispers. Thank you for all the encouragement you give others.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  5. Hi Everyone,

    Thank you so much for your support and for your kind words for our talented artists featured. I plan to share more from our archives in the months to come. Congratulations Ali, Robert, Ralph and Jim on your wonderful poems!

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  6. These are all so beautiful ~ kudos to all the artists for their visions and expressions! :)

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    1. Dear Colleen,

      Thank you so much for your lovely words, gifts of encouragement for our talented friends. Wishing you the best with all your writing endeavors.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  7. These are exquisitely crafted, and the use of space makes each word come alive. I wish I could write like this.

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