Thursday, November 9, 2017

The Team Theme Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By Gert Knop—Germany, Jack Horne—England and Inge Wesdijk (Daginne Aignend)—The Netherlands

At the Blue River

By Gert Knop—Germany, Jack Horne—England
and Inge Wesdijk (Daginne Aignend)—The Netherlands

Lonely at the blue river,
lingering,
gazing at the stones in it,
shiny, like precious jewels,
without the dust of the past.
Lonely at the blue river,
thoughts wander with the wind,
rushing distant clouds
on a quiet day

Soothing, murmuring
friendly wavelets
whispering stories
as they move
in circles
Tranquil moments,
daily devoirs
vanish leisurely
A praise for the mind

Lost in my memories,
serene sadness,
at peace with the past.
Raindrops splash,
each drop adding ripples;
the sun still shines, 
sparkling on the water.
Mellow moments,
a salve for the soul.

35 comments:

  1. Dear Gert, Jack and Inge,

    This is an absolutely wonderful poem! I like the introspective feel and have read this several times. Each, taking something new from your words. The last two lines are a "salve for (my) soul" today.

    Thank you, my friends! What a treasure you are.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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    1. Dear Karen,

      Great that you liked our co-write, my friend! I had the idea to write a poem with us three and I think it was really a good idea! I hope that your health has improved and at least a little!

      Love and Blessings,

      Gert

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    2. Dear Gert,

      I think the opportunity for sharing thoughts in a cohesive way is that hallmark of our poetry journal. Writing is an opportunity to share our light. This poem an insightful view my friends.

      Wishing your joy in your writing journeys. May your light always shines.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  2. If I had skipped my stones into this water; If I was to gaze at a surface glass-off, imagining the streaks of glare from the sky; might I dwell on terrain below the surface, where the wind holds no sway; and no doubt, I would surmise that the clouds above were not of my world, that I could not even hazard a guess as to whether those clouds were coming or going; I would come to acknowledge... It is me who is blue, and my reflection is what gives the open water its hue.

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    1. Great your comment, my friend! And even more as you liked our co-write!

      Kind regards,

      Gert

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    2. It is a wonderful compilation, Gert. I just connected with the initial stanza, on a personal level.

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    3. Wow Michael!

      Thank you so much for taking time to share your thoughts for our trio of poetry friends. Each writer is challenged to move forward in the time and space one is able to carry messages. I really appreciate your thoughts for our three country friends.

      Love and light,
      Karen

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    4. Dear Karen,
      Yes, my friend! Great to receive so many positive comments on our co-write! Will send you a copy of the anthology (in German) with the German translation of your poems. I hope that your health has improved!
      Love and Blessings, Gert

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  3. Each poets' undeniably own signature style is so very apparent, an integral factor in enhancing the other; the swaying rhythmic lines tease us as they delightfully segue into the richly woven tapestry of words which provide such an stunningly exquisite visual experience. Even just sounding this out I felt like I was trespassing on the sacred grounds of good friends sharing deep secrets, so enchanting a moment as this poem is.

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    1. Hi Leslie, Thank you so much for your friendly and thoughtful comment! Yours, Gert

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  4. Thanks for all those nice comments. It was a pleasure writing together and I experienced again that poets inspire one another.

    Best wishes,
    Inge

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    1. Yes, dear Inge and it won't be the first time for a co-write of us three!! Take care and all the best!
      Love,
      Gert

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  5. Gert, Jack and Inge,
    A great collaboration between the thre of you.
    Your friend,
    David Fox

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    1. Hi David, Thank you for you friendly comment!

      Your friend,

      Gert

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    2. Thank you David, it was a good experience and I'm glad you like the result.

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  6. thanks for such nice comments - & thanks to Gert & Inge for writing with me

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    1. Dear Jack, Thank you for writing with us, my friend!

      Love from Gert

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    2. Two words: Inspiring & Fun. For the record, it's not an attempt to characterize either one of you, Gert and Jack ☺

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  7. The atmosphere you create is palpable - I feel I am right there in the meditative presence of the water. Nicely done !

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    1. Thank you, dear Molly for your comment! All the best, Gert

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    2. Dear Molly, what a nice compliment. Thank You!

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  8. Congratulations on a beautiful poem, one that invites the reader into it, into an atmosphere of quiet and calm, of reflection and peace with what is.
    It is very meditative.
    Thank you.

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    1. Hi Jo, your comment was highly appreciated! All the best! Gert

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    2. Dear Jo,

      I'm really happy with your comment, especially that you find some peace and quiet in the words.

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  9. Congratulations Inge, Jack and Gert.

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    1. Thank you Denis for your friendly comment!

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    2. Thank you kindly, dear Denis

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  10. Enjoyed reading your work..Way to go..Interesting the way you three worked together..Sara

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    1. Thank you, Sara, it was a great experience to write together.
      Glad you enjoyed it.

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  11. Hi Sara, appreciated your comment, yes it was great to co-write with Inge and Jack!

    All the best and Thank you,

    Gert

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  12. I really enjoyed the piece you all created, thanks for sharing!

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    1. Thank you, dear Peggy for your comment!
      All the best,
      Gert

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    2. Dear Peggy, I'm glad you enjoyed our poem.
      Many thanks!

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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  13. A wonderful and creative piece of collaborative writing! Truly enjoyed this one!

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    1. Thanks my friend, a wonderful compliment.

      Best wishes,
      Inge

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