Predawn dark…unable to sleep,
I open the door and step out on to the lawn, look around the potted plants and
suddenly see one pure white flower in full bloom. I marvel at its perfection
and touch its petals gently…then I come inside and read about it.
I go outside again and
photograph it to send it by email to a friend half way across the world…
weaving
into
that relationship once more-
one frayed thread
*The
white hibiscus a perennial with healing properties, is a symbol of
divinity, innocence, purity and royal beauty. In Japanese hanakotoba,
the hibiscus means “gentle” and it can be given to more or less
anyone simply as a nice present, there are no strong emotions or questions of
relationships attached to it.
Previously published Haibun Today, Volume 8, Number 1, March 2014
Dr.
Ms. Angelee Deodhar, an eye surgeon by profession as well as a haiku poet,
translator, and artist lives and works in Chandigarh, India. Her haiku,
haibun and haiga have been published internationally in various books and
journals, and her work can be viewed online too. She has edited
three anthologies Journeys , Journeys 2015 and Journeys
2017, her latest anthology of International Haibun has just been
released on Amazon. It has a total of 133 haibun, the work of 29 poets of
international repute.
Dear Angelee, this is such a lovely selection for us to enjoy. Congratulations on having this poem honored with an Archive Selection. This is quite lovely! Happy holidays and Aloha, Connie
ReplyDeleteDear Connie,how kind of you to write,thank you.I appreciate dear Karen's efforts to connect us all through Whispers.May you have a wonderful new year Aloha,angelee
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece of writing Angelee. The haiku especially weaves in beautifully with the narrative. Wish you and yours a merry Christmas!
ReplyDeleteDear Angelee,
ReplyDeleteThe treasures of nature are very inspirational, you captured the beauty of the hibiscus in your poem in a striking way. A joy to read.
Best wishes,
Inge
Really enjoyed this piece!
ReplyDeletecheers and applause all over the place for Angelee!
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