Out on the Porch
By Sara Kendrick--United States, and Jack Horne--England
Steel gray cotton
balls hang suspended
Sky blue sky
accents each ball
As the distant sun
inches up
Realizing the
roosters' call
An acorn loses its
hold and falls
Lands upon the roof
or barn
One ping upon the
roof top
Shrill squeal as it
tells a yarn
Dampness and cool
opens this fall day
There's a stillness
undefined
Life seems to move
slowly forward
Good and evil seen
intertwined
My breath is
smoking on the frosty air,
the starry sky is
inky black,
with distant smells
of burning bramblewood:
reminders that will
take me back.
A child again, I
stand in happy awe,
and feel the magic
of the night,
and picture Gran
beside me, as before,
my hand in hers, my
spirits bright.
A hooting owl disturbs
the peaceful calm,
and then the
chiming village clock...
it's time to go
indoors, because I've found
the remedy for
writer's block!
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful co-write, well written, with a lot of imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sara and Jack for this atmospheric poem.
Best wishes,
Inge
Dear Inge and Feby,
DeleteIt was such a joy to publish this beautiful collaborative poem by Sara and Jack, both very talented writers.
Sara and Jack,
Congratulations on all the wonderful comments on your artistic experience!
Blessings to all,
Karen
Enjoyed your piece, thahks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteUnusual imagery in these words. Feel as if I am unwrapping a multi-layered gift, giving surprises along the way. Thanks for writing.
ReplyDeleteWonderful collaboration Sara and Jack. Loved the answer to writers block; just sit on the porch and take in the wonders of nature. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Charlene
Cograts Sara & Jack for this great co-write, my friends with great imagery!
ReplyDeleteLove,
Gert
Sara and Jack,
ReplyDeleteA spending collaborative poem! I liked it a lo!
Yours truly,
David
Thank you, all, for the lovely comments & my thanks also to Sara for writing with me x
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