Rain
over Vietnam
There is the calm before the rain
It’s almost silent all around
The clouds expectant in the sky
Foreboding birds are homeward bound.
The soldiers stare at looming clouds
There is the calm before the rain
And yet there’s tension in the air
Will all this waiting be in vain?
They know the feeling well enough
The sun gets left out in the cold
There is the calm before the rain
They have to be prepared and bold.
The sound of planes will soon be heard
Torrential bombs will fall again
But ‘til the heavens burst in floods
There is the calm before the rain.
Inspired by the song “Have you ever seen the rain?”
Sung by Credence Clearwater Revival.
With underlying reference to the Vietnam War.
There is the calm before the rain
It’s almost silent all around
The clouds expectant in the sky
Foreboding birds are homeward bound.
The soldiers stare at looming clouds
There is the calm before the rain
And yet there’s tension in the air
Will all this waiting be in vain?
They know the feeling well enough
The sun gets left out in the cold
There is the calm before the rain
They have to be prepared and bold.
The sound of planes will soon be heard
Torrential bombs will fall again
But ‘til the heavens burst in floods
There is the calm before the rain.
Inspired by the song “Have you ever seen the rain?”
Sung by Credence Clearwater Revival.
With underlying reference to the Vietnam War.
Paul Callus is a Maltese
author who writes both in Maltese and English. He has contributed to several
anthologies. Apart from poetry he writes lyrics for songs and has published two
books, one a story book aimed at children (related to his experience as a
teacher) and a historical book based on research.
Dear Paul,
ReplyDeleteA very impressive poem! I also like the background info about how you got inspired. A deserved re-publication.
All my best,
Inge
Thank you, Inge. So pleased that this poem is seeing the light of day again...it's been 3 years since I last read it! Wishing you all the best for Christmas & the New Year. // paul
ReplyDeleteLovely Christmas days and a Happy & Healthy 2018 for you and your loved ones as well, Paul
DeleteKind regards,
Inge
A very belated Thank you dear friend. RIP Hope you are now writing 'heavenly poetry'
DeleteYour poignant poem makes us all so aware of the devastation of war. Your well written piece shares in contrast the beauty of nature and the ugliness of war. Let us all pray for peace as our year of 2017 comes to an end. Blessings on the Holiday season Paul, to you and your family. Aloha, Connie
ReplyDeleteThank you, Connie. I appreciate your insightful feedback. Christmas & the new Year both brought hope and joy. May the new year be kind to you and your beloved ones. Sahha paul
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