Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Loving You--By George L. Ellison--England

Loving You
(Terza Rima)

I fell in love with you on a moonlit night
Emotions entwined in passionate embrace
The sky was clear the stars were shining so bright

Our love so strong how fast our hearts they did race
I have lived each moment to love only you
I pray each day that I see your smiling face

Every day it’s my aim in what I do
To endeavour to do the best that I can
 Always be loving gentle honest and true

Be by your side at all times when you are wan
I will always try to be a gentle man

George L. Ellison is a writer of poetry and  short stories. He as published two books called Poetic Reminiscences and Weaving Words.  George lives with his wife and dogs in Chester-Le-Street, County Durham in England. He is a member of The Writers and Poetry Alliance. He is currently working on his new project as well as learning to play the saxophone at the Sage Gateshead!
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15 comments:

  1. KristinaFebruary 12, 2014 at 10:57 AM

    George, this is simply a most loving and tender poem. I love it. True love is a rare and beautiful thing, a gift to be treasured. Seems you got it right. Kristina

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    1. George L.EllisonFebruary 18, 2014 at 7:43 AM

      Thank you Kristina for your kind comments they are very much appreciated

      George

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  2. UnknownFebruary 12, 2014 at 2:55 PM

    Hello, George, I love your very romantic Terza Rima. Love is a wonderful experience in life and you write of it with ease, flow and expression. How blessed we are to know love! It is one of life's greatest treasures! Sheri

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    1. George L.EllisonFebruary 18, 2014 at 7:45 AM

      Thank you Sheri for those many kind words you comments are very much appreciated

      George

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  3. UnknownFebruary 12, 2014 at 8:25 PM

    Dear George,

    Well put down poem, the style and beauty is superb. I have learned a new style of writing poetry from you. Thanks for sharing.

    Andrew Ntchindi Jere - Malawii

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    1. George L.EllisonFebruary 18, 2014 at 7:55 AM

      Thank you for your kind comments Andrew I am pleased you like the style if you wish you can join Rhoda, Sheri and I on the writers and poets alliance website where you can learn a whole lot more it would be lovely to see you and I'm sure Rhoda wouldn't mind!!

      Give it some thought

      Thanks again

      George

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  4. Rhoda GalgianiFebruary 13, 2014 at 8:17 AM

    Beautiful word and beautiful poetry form George. Nice reading you this morning with my delicious coffee. Looking forward to reading your next posting...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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    1. George L.EllisonFebruary 18, 2014 at 8:08 AM

      Thank Rhoda for your kind comments they are very much appreciated !!!!

      George

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2014 at 11:19 AM

    Dear George,

    You made excellent use of the Terza Rima form to express a love that is pure and enduring. Your lady is lucky to have you in her corner, especially on days when she feels down. Hope you had a wonderful Valentine's Day together! Best wishes, Carolyn Devonshire

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    1. George L.EllisonFebruary 18, 2014 at 8:12 AM

      Believe it or not I don't make much of Valentine's day Caroline but I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem as much as you say your kind comments are very much appreciated!!!!

      George

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  6. CharleneFebruary 15, 2014 at 1:44 PM

    You sure know what a lady likes in a man; gentleness, honesty and true. You expressed well a lovely poem and it awakened increased feelings of love for my sweetheart reminiscing the times he is this kind of man. Thank you for a well written poem.
    Charlene

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    1. George L.EllisonFebruary 18, 2014 at 8:17 AM

      The pleasure is all mine Charlene I am pleased you liked my poem so much and that it caused such a romantic effect on you I hope your day went well

      Thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated

      George

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2014 at 12:29 PM

    Hi George. Great poem. I love the sincerity and openness of it. I would be honored if you would consider submitting some poetry to my publication, Creative Inspirations. More information can be found at the TGBTG! Publications website (link below), or you can get my address information from Karen. In reading your bio, I see that we share an interest in instruments. I am learning how to play the guitar and after that I want to learn to play the drums. I hope it goes well for you and hope to hear from you regarding some poetry. Continued blessings!

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
    www.tgbtgpublictions.com

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  8. UnknownMarch 25, 2014 at 11:06 AM

    Lovely and loving... Terry

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  9. LawrencealotJanuary 17, 2015 at 5:37 PM

    Lovely Tersa Rima, friend.
    Now I'm on a quest. A form called George's Mirrored Hourglass is attributed to George L. Ellison. I am hoping that is you. If so I wish to include the proper specifications and attribution in my blog.
    POETSCOLLECTIVE.ORG/POETRYFORMS

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