Sunday, February 9, 2014

haiku--By Sabrina West--United States

day moon
where do i look for
the missing haiku

 natural food store
menopausal shopping carts
bullfighting aisle

 Sabrina West is new to the world of haiku poetry. She loves nature, permaculture and is a passionate dog walker. In the face of California's current drought, she is building rain barrels and looking for all kinds of ways to conserve water.
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10 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 10, 2014 at 12:45 PM

    Sabrina, I love your rendition of Haiku and the sort of cynical side projected, which provides a certain humorous outlook on the realities of life........ Sheri

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  2. KristinaFebruary 11, 2014 at 4:52 AM

    'Menapausal shopping carts' - great line! Kristina

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  3. Karen O'LearyFebruary 11, 2014 at 1:48 PM

    It's so good to have you at Whispers Sabrina! So happy to see you already have two wonderful comments. If you have any questions, please let me know. Keep your talent shining. Congratulations on your writing successes.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  4. Rhoda GalgianiFebruary 12, 2014 at 2:20 AM

    I agree with Kristina - great line, 'Menapausal shopping carts'. Very unique and deep! Way to go...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  5. Kathryn CollinsFebruary 14, 2014 at 8:49 AM

    Dear Sabrina -

    Both of these Haiku are wonderful. HOWEVER, the second is stupendous. Bullfighting in a health food store cracked me up. Oh forget it - each line delivers it's own punch. I love day moon/missing haiku. More more.

    love,
    Kathy

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2014 at 11:24 AM

    Hi Sabrina,

    What great wit you have! I absolutely adore the line about the "menopausal shopping cart." Brilliant haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn

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  7. UnknownFebruary 17, 2014 at 9:44 AM

    Went to Walmart just today
    Where is a parking spot I say
    Every one full of shopping carts.

    We need more Haiku on Whispers Sabrina, thanks for posting these gems.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2014 at 1:36 PM

    Hi Sabrina. I enjoyed your Haiku. I hope you will consider submitting some poetry (Haiku included) to Creative Inspirations, the poetry publication the good Lord blessed me to create in His glory and honor. More information can be viewed at the link below, or you can get the mailing info from Karen. Continued blessings!

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
    www.tgbtgpublictions.com

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  9. UnknownMarch 1, 2014 at 9:56 AM

    Sabrina,
    Both haiku are good embellished with a little humor.
    ~David Fox

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  10. anaisnaisJuly 2, 2014 at 4:01 AM

    Enjoyable Haiku and good to see you here, welcome! x

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