My Precious Valentine
The rain in the eves is our love song
Echoing through the years
Full of the ups and downs of life
Voice of all hopes and fears.
I never felt your shadow,
Only a gentle hand
And words in my ear, with laughter
Never unfair demand.
Traveling a road at sunrise
Eager to climb each hill
Comparing notes at sunset
Wanting to have our fill
Of days that we shared together;
Oh how we danced along.
Oh how the world consumed us
Filling our hearts with song.
Born in Calgary, Alberta, Pam Murray has been writing poetry since the mid-1960’s. She was married for over 41 years and has two daughters, a son-in-law, and a grandson. Pam has been published in a variety of venues. Her proudest writing accomplishment was a poem she wrote for a United Way fundraiser, which was later framed with a French translation and hung on the wall of the legislature in Ottawa, Canada. To her, poetry is a transposition of a vision she sees in her mind. Writing and crocheting are her passions.
Pam, what a beautiful poem and I could just feel the love in it. Thank for sharing such a lovely poem for a precious valentine.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene
Thank you so much, Charlene. It's for my late husband; my valentine.
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Thank you so much Charlene. This is for my late husband. We were lovers and best friends for over 41 years.
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Pam that really makes it all the more special. A really lovely tribute to your love for him.
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A very touching poem with great emotion and rhythm. Any man would be thrilled to have his wife express such feelings. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully constructed poem of love everlasting. Robert
ReplyDeleteThank you Robert. My husband and I were more than spouses. We were best friends for 41 years.
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Pam, your beautiful poem reminds us that even though one of us is gone the one remaining holds such lovely memories as yours and like a beautiful bud bursts into a lovely and floral word painting, touching the hearts and souls of those who are fortunate to read................... Sheri
ReplyDeleteThank you for your sweet comments Sheri. I wouldn't change my life with him in spite of the sadness that sometimes comes. We shared some wonderful memories.
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Pleasant and enchanting, as well as touching the heart. Another great poem, Pam. Thank you for sharing.
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You are so welcome Maurice. God gave me a great blessing in words and writing is my way of rejoicing in my blessings.
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Dear Pam -
ReplyDeleteWe did have perfect valentines. I hope he's reading this somewhere.
love,
Kathy
Thank you, Linda Hurdwell, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteVery poignant, beautiful words.