Painting pictures with words.
Opening a part of the soul.
Emotion flowing with the lines.
Tapestry skillfully woven.
Reflecting thoughts artfully.
Yearning to make a difference.
--Karen O'Leary--Whispers' Editor
Tuesday, February 4, 2014
Duo Dancer--By Eleanor Michael--United States
Duo Dancer
I dance with partner or without. Alone, I lead. With partner, I follow. Together is better.
Eleanor Michael has published poetry and short stories in a variety of venues.
Oh how beautiful! I immediately went to thoughts of 'dancing with God'. Truly that is the best way to live life. He leads I follow. Excellent poem that truly touched my heart. Thank you so much. Love, Charlene
Hello, Kathryn, to me your words are a great and definitive metaphor of life and blended into a beautiful warm and poetic picture. Beautifully written and expressed! Sheri
Thank you, Carolyn Devonshire, for the following comment--
Your poem touched a special place in my heart, Eleanor. Yes, dancing "together" is better, but even those who are alone need to dance and enjoy life. Touching! Best wishes, Carolyn Devonshire
Thank you everyone for these lovely comments for Eleanor. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem from a talented writer and friend. Eleanor, I hope you enjoy all your comments. Wishing you continued success with all your writing endeavors.
Oh how beautiful! I immediately went to thoughts of 'dancing with God'. Truly that is the best way to live life. He leads I follow. Excellent poem that truly touched my heart. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene
gorgeous poem. twists and turns, stops and starts in a few well chosen words. thank you for sharing, Ralph
ReplyDeleteloved this spare but wonderful poem, I agree together is better
ReplyDeleteOh yes Eleanor. A warm body beats empty arms. Lovely poem.
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Kathy
Nice poem, Eleanor. I am not a very good dancer, but I agree that "together is better." Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
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Hello, Kathryn, to me your words are a great and definitive metaphor of life and blended into a beautiful warm and poetic picture. Beautifully written and expressed! Sheri
ReplyDeleteThank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful! Blessings, Connie
Thank you, Carolyn Devonshire, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteYour poem touched a special place in my heart, Eleanor. Yes, dancing "together" is better, but even those who are alone need to dance and enjoy life. Touching! Best wishes, Carolyn Devonshire
So touching your poetry - yes, touches my heart. I feel spiritual relief reading your words. Gentle and soul soothing...
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Thank you everyone for these lovely comments for Eleanor. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem from a talented writer and friend. Eleanor, I hope you enjoy all your comments. Wishing you continued success with all your writing endeavors.
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