Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By Leokadia Durmaj, Australia and Robert Hewett, United States

Magic was the Night

By Leokadia Durmaj, Australia and Robert Hewett, United States

Looking up at the sky last night,
To see my cherished Star Angels there.
Bright stars shining ever so bright,
At first there were none I could see,
Hiding behind every dark cloud.
Clouds were creating a painting,
Evolving different shaped colours,
A scenic masterpiece to be.
Magical dreams of love began.

You lay there on that grassy knoll
Communing with your sky angels
Winking like iridescent raindrops
Upon a Lilly padded pond.
On my arm you were my angel.
The softness of your hair and skin,
Content within your world of love,
Your Star Angels; my Earth angel.
A perfect night for beautiful dreams.
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18 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 4, 2014 at 9:08 AM

    Lee and Bob, this poem stirs so many emotions within me and brings goose bumps to my arms and the back of my neck. It is masterful, in that you have managed to keep it brief and magical in the simple presentation, intent and emotional concept! Sometimes, a joint effort becomes like a dangling participle, but this joint venture is successful in balancing and maintaining! Very beautifully presented! Sheri

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    1. UnknownFebruary 4, 2014 at 11:21 AM

      Wow Sheri, what a great comment. We do appreciate your glowing words.
      Bob

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    2. AnielicaFebruary 4, 2014 at 4:27 PM

      Thank you so much Sheri, your wonderful comment is greatly appreciated, Take care always, Leokadia

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  2. CharleneFebruary 4, 2014 at 11:37 AM

    Oh I love romance! You well portrayed a scene that could be cherished by all lovers. A beautiful and intense poem written by the both of you. Thank you for sharing your talents together and with us. I much enjoyed it.
    Charlene

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    1. UnknownFebruary 4, 2014 at 1:01 PM

      Thanks Charlene for this wonderful comment. It is much appreciated. Bob

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  3. AnielicaFebruary 4, 2014 at 4:41 PM

    Thank you Charlene for your lovely comment. Bob is a wonderful writer whom I have known a long time. I too love romance and the magic it can bring. Take care, Leokadia

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 5, 2014 at 1:03 PM

    This is one of the best descriptive poems I have read before. Another collaboration that satisfies. Good shades of romantic flare throughout the entire poem. Magic united by two wonderful poets. Thank you Leokadia and Robert.

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
    www.tgbtgpublictions.com

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    1. UnknownFebruary 5, 2014 at 1:30 PM

      Thanks Rev Reynolds, that is wonderful accolade you have given us. Bob

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    2. AnielicaFebruary 5, 2014 at 5:34 PM

      WOW! Thank you Maurice for those very kind words. Blessings always, Leokadia

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 5, 2014 at 4:39 PM

    Dear Bob and Leokadia, Your lovely poem reminds people that there are "stars" who make their lives brighter. What a wonderful thing it would be to have a "Star Angel." Your writing is superb and I love the way you compliment each other's styles. Well done! Love,
    Carolyn

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    1. AnielicaFebruary 5, 2014 at 5:47 PM

      Thank you dear Carolyn for your beautiful words. I have been through so much in my lifetime. I wrote some of my story on Roberts Hub page. I find such peace looking at the stars at night, I call them my heavenly Angels. Sometimes they hide behind darkened clouds if there is a storm to be. I do love watching my star Angels. Sending blessings with love, Leokadia

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    2. UnknownFebruary 6, 2014 at 6:44 PM

      Carolyn, you are such a jewel, and you sure know how to make a writer feel good. Thanks for this great comment. Bob

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  6. Karen O'LearyFebruary 7, 2014 at 8:34 AM

    Thank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following comment--

    Your collaborative poem sang to me in perfect harmony! Blessings, Connie

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    1. UnknownFebruary 7, 2014 at 2:12 PM

      Thank you very much Connie for that dazzling reaction. Bob

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    2. AnielicaFebruary 10, 2014 at 6:50 PM

      I appreciate your lovely kind words Connie, thank you so much.
      Take care always, Leokadia

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  7. KristinaFebruary 8, 2014 at 3:53 AM

    Wow, this is wonderful! Has a magical, romantical feeling to it that just makes me smile and feel good. I especially love the last four lines! This hopeless romantic is touched, and moved by your words. Thank you. Kristina

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    1. AnielicaFebruary 10, 2014 at 6:53 PM

      Thank you for your wonderful comment, greatly appreciated. Take care always, Leokadia

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  8. UnknownFebruary 9, 2014 at 6:12 AM

    Thank you Krissie, for that most wonderful comment on Lee and My joint poem.
    Your comment makes me feel very proud for being a part of this poem and this poet community. Robert

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