a contortionist…….
…….the face fits
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stop-and-search…….
…….for lost youth
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memory-lane…….
…….a flyover
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the wind of change.......
.......a flag at half-mast
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a man sleeps alone.......
.......heads full of crowds
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Ralph Stott was born in Kent, England in 1957. He is married and has two daughters. He studied design at the Medway College of Design in the mid-70's. Expressing ideas through the written/visual media, has always interested him. Ralph began to dedicate more time to poetry with The Writers and Poetry Alliance, in particular the 'Stylists' forum, over the last 3 years. He has self published one book called Legends For Lunchtime; a collection of short stories and has a second book pending called Twist and Twist Again, which is a collection of Twister poems, a form he created.
Hi, Ralph - very interesting couplets, sort of remind me of a two line limerick combined with a certain Haiku/Senryu style. You have effectively painted enough here for one to get the visuals. Very creative! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
ReplyDeleteHello. Thank you so much for your comments. They are a blend of styles which I enjoy reading and writing in their in right. Thank you for your time. Ralph.
DeleteDear Ralph,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your broken monoku's today. Each one paints a vivid picture and stops the reader to ponder on its meaning. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Sandra Stefanowich
The broken-style is a New venture for me. Thank you for your encouragement.....many more to write! Thanks fir dropping by. Ralph.
DeleteThank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteThese are simply wonderful Ralph. I think my favorite of these
is:
memory-lane…….
…….a flyover
Each one is a gem! Blessings, Connie
Thank you Connie for stopping by. I wrote these one evening with my head full of words, cutting and pasting these results! Glad you have enjoyed the out-comes. Ralph.
DeleteRalph thank you for sharing your talent and well very well written broken monokus and for also introducing me to a new form of poetry. I quite enjoyed the read.
ReplyDeleteCharlene
Hi Charlene. A New style which I found on this site too. Thanks for your interest Ralph
DeleteEach and every one of these couplets gives such an intense picture. I am moved reading them (over and over I might add).
ReplyDeletePam
Hi Pam. I only write these occasionally as they take a lot out of me: something so short! Glad you have them. Planning some more after lots of editing for June, my next slot! Ralph
DeleteInteresting and very well done... Terry
ReplyDeleteDear Ralph,
ReplyDeleteYour monoku style is breath-taking. I enjoyed all of them and my favorite is "memory lane...a fly-over." Perhaps that is the only way to resurrect the past. You have given us a day brightener as well as food for thought. Excellent work! Your fan, Carolyn
Hello Carolyn. Thank you for your words. I enjoy composing at night always without pen or paper! Will post some more if I remember to write them down! Ralph.
DeleteThank you, Ralph, for blessing us with your talent. I am a fan of the short verse and it seems you compose it very well. Continued blessings!
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Many thanks for your encouragement. It's a new way of writing for me. I Will post some more, if people still enjoy reading them. Many thanks again. Ralph.
ReplyDeleteTwisters with a difference eh Ralph I like these new couplets they look quite fun
ReplyDeleteWell done
Create On, Create Well
God Bless
George
Thanks George. A creative patch for myself at the moment! Glad you popped by, Ralph.
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