Sunday, April 20, 2014

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By George L. Ellison, England and Dena M. Ferrari, United States

Moonlight On the Shore

By George L. Ellison and Dena M. Ferrari

Moonlight on a tranquil shore
Rippling waves tracing patterns galore
A Gull cries out in the dead of night
As surf breaks at the water’s edge without might
Fresh and cool the salt sea air
Happy am I with you so near

How happy am I to be here cuddling with you
Embraced by the salt sea air and your arms so true
Tide washes in sparkling under the moons light
Gull tucks its head under its wing and sleeps for the night
A dolphin leaps high for pure joy splashes
As we watch the sea under the stars as a comet dashes


Sharing this magical moment of ours
Watching the clear sky and its meteor showers
Making a wish that this night will never end
With you by my side who are more than a friend
Feeling the sand between our toes
What lies before us God only knows

Here’s to the wish we cast on that shooting star
The future is ours no matter how far
The mystery of life will always continue
As long as love is alive and I’m with you
Here’s to watching the dawn’s new day
Glowing in the horizon as dolphins splash and play


Moonlight on a tranquil shore
Rippling waves tracing patterns galore
A Gull cries out in the dead of night
As surf breaks at the water’s edge without might
Fresh and cool the salt sea air
Happy am I with you so near

45 comments:

  1. Excellent Dena and George, very complimentary to each other' s style. Good to see you both here. Dena I was wondering when you might show. Very nice joint poem for Whispers. Robert

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    1. Thank you Robert I'm pleased you enjoyed our collaboration which was my idea and Dena was just too happy to join in

      Perhaps she'll get the whispers bug see ho knows!!

      Thanks again

      George

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    2. Heyla Bob!
      Thanks for the wonderful review...
      Giorgio and I had such a wonderful time putting this together....
      His idea....was beautiful...
      Wait....just wait......He and I will be working on another....soon....
      Mwhahahahahaaa!!
      Big Cheesy Grin!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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  2. Hey, you two, really like the two impressions with the bright, visuals and the romantic allure. Ah! Ain't love grand! And you two offer the reader an awesome collaborative and pure joy to read and visualize! Well done! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net

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    1. I'm pleased you enjoyed reading this collaboration between Dena and I we certainly enjoyed writing it Sheri!

      Thanks for your kind comments they are very much appreciated!

      G

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    2. Heyla Sheri!
      Thank you for the read and review!~
      Always a pleasure to be a part of something GREAT!!!!
      Writing about LOVE is easy....when one is embraced by the emotion!!
      Here's to you!!
      Giorgio and I have "something" up our sleeves....for a later coolaboration!!
      Ya'll....have been....warned!!
      Mwhahahahaaa!!!

      Thanks Giorgio....for a wonderful opportunity!!

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  3. George and Dena,
    A very nice poem. The two of you complement each other's writing styles wonderfully! Looking forward to reading more of you.
    Sincerely,
    David Fox

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    1. We quite often read and reply on each other's work David and over time have created quite an affinity with each other so it just seemed right that I should ask her to collaborate with me on this poem I'm pleased you like our finished work your kind comments are very much appreciated

      George

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    2. Heyla David!
      What a wonderful review...by YOU!
      Giorgio and I have a "way with the Quill....as we spill....our ink"!
      This was a delight to put together....
      There will....be more....to be sure!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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  4. Bravo.Whay a great write. Word and content perfect. Stunning visuals. Excellent and mich enjoyed. take good care. Pete. Loved it!

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    2. Thank you Peter for your kind comments Dena and I thoroughly enjoyed writing it your kind comments are very much appreciated

      George

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    3. Heyla Peter!!!
      Always a pleasure to see you lurking about!
      Thank you for the awesome review!
      Doing a collaborative with Giorgio....was a no-brainer!
      His talent...shines!!
      Have a great Day!
      Brightest Blessings to you!!
      ~Dena

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  5. An awesome collaboration of two poets and beautiful love images.

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    1. Thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated!!

      George

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    2. A walk in haiku....what a wonderful name!!!
      Thanks for the read...and your comments!!
      Giorgio and I had a wonderful time putting this gem....together...
      Have a great Day!!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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  6. Way to go!!! Like two peas in a pod, so cozy and comfy...LOL Great write you two - a joy to always read work by you both - now together...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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    1. Thank you Rhoda I'm pleased you like our first collaboration and yes we have something planned for later in the year when Dena will take the lead no prizes for guessing when!

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    2. HEYLA My Northern Sistah!!
      Yo words....drip with pure....sugah!!
      Ya'll need to come on by....and set a spell!!!
      Thank ye kindly for your always touching words of review!!
      Giorgio had a wonderful...lead....
      Next time...it'll be mine....mwhahahahahaaa!!!
      LOL
      Here's to you....shoveling out from that white stuff!!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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  7. Congratulations on a wonderful co-write Dena and George.. Your beautiful words create a painting that captivates the reader for its visual imagery, it is indeed breathing. You collect many of the parts of creation in all its glory, transforming it into this amazing poetry, Take care always, Lee

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    1. I'm pleased you like our collaboration so much Lee we certainly enjoyed writing it thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated!

      George

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    2. Heyla Lee!!
      Always a wonderful pleasure to see your shining review!
      Thank you very much....always!
      With a topic of love....how can anyone....go wrong!?
      Giorgio and I had a great time with this gem....trust me....there will....be more!
      This was fun to do!!
      Here's to you and yours!!!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!!
      ~Dena

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  8. Thank you, Joe Maverick, for the following comment--

    I found this to be a heart warming write with the most emotive imagery, all the best Joe.

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    1. Thanks Karen for Joe's addition!
      Thank YOU Joe....for your wonderful review...
      Always a pleasure to see others enjoy the gems we create!!
      Here's to you!!
      Have a great day!!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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    2. Thank you joe (and Karen) for your kind comments they are very much appreciated and as Dena says we will be teaming up again later in the year swatch this space !!

      Thanks (Grazie)

      George (Giorgio)

      ( The Italian for those who don't know is just a bot of fun between Dena and I for my love of Italy no more no less!)

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  9. Thank you, Isha Wagner, for the following comment--

    This poem, singing and dancing with love : two people getting joy from each other while they watch nature at play can't help but make one wonder if the beauty around them would have been so enthralling if each were on their own, alone. The magic of love enhances everything around us, the world seems stunningly beautiful. This is the wondrous mystery of love,

    Yours sincerely
    Isha Wagner

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    1. IF You only knew Isha!
      I have been a happy camper living on 50 acres of woods....with my awesome Hubby!! Love is an easy reach....when the heart is overflowing!!! Anyone that knows me....knows....how much my life is full of love!
      Giorgio and I had a great time putting this gem together!
      His talent shines bright as always!!!
      We have plans for a future write....THAT one....will be a fun run!!
      Thank you for your awesome review!!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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    2. I don't have 50 acres Isha just a front and back garden I am however also happily married Dena and I have replied to each other's poetry for 4 years now and I thought we could collaborate on a poem as we get along so well she in turn jumpef at the chance!

      She asked me what wolud we write and I had the first verse of this poem written down so I sent her the text and we took turns writing a verse then Dena suggested that the first stanza should be repeated wallah!

      I'm pleased you like the poem as much as we enjoyed writing it!

      Thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated

      George

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  10. Congratulations! A very beautiful poem with magical choice of words. As I read every line I can relate to the image. The meaning of love that flows through your poem leaves me with a smile. Way to go for you. I wish you many more beautiful poems in future. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem and making us feel good.

    Thanks
    Archana

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    1. Thank YOU Archana!!
      Even half way around the world....the emotions of what is in our hearts can bring out the love that is needed to bring a gem....to become a treasure!
      We enjoyed collaborating....and creating this wonderful poem...full of lively imagery...
      Making people feel good....is what our words....are all about!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
      ~Dena

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    2. Thank you Archana for those comments I'm pleased we made it so magical for you Dena and I enjoyed this first foray into collaboration and we have more planned for later in the year

      Thanks again for your kind comments they are very much appreciated

      George

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  11. Thanks Karen for adding this to your collection...it made for a wonderful B'Day Gift....for me!
    Monday was my Special Day!!!
    Giorgio and I have a future gem....in mind....for later on....down the road!
    Again...thank you....very much!
    Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
    ~Dena

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    1. Dear Dena,

      It was a pleasure to publish this wonderful poem. You are welcome to submit more poetry--individual or co-writes--any time. I am so excited about the wonderful response you and George are getting. Wishing you ongoing success.

      Blessings,
      Karen

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  12. Beautifully done you two! immediately brought
    to mind a couple that will be exchanging vows
    soon. He is very Romantic! nice to have at least
    one person in the relationship blessed with that
    quality!! Lol! Mary

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    1. We like doing romantic Mary I'm pleased you like so much our next poem will be very different however and somewhat spooky if Dena has anything to do with it!

      Thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated

      George

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    2. Heyla Mary...
      Thank you for the wonderful words...
      There's always a touch of respect when collaborating with another...
      Giorgio and I are more than happy to pull our best....when we collaborate...
      ....oh and Giorgio....I am planning....oh yes....I am planning....October will be here....sooooooon enough! Mwhahahahahahaaa

      I am pleased to hear that Romance is still alive and well!!
      Chivalry...is not dead!
      Many Blessings upon the new Couple!
      May their lives always shine with the fires of passion and love....

      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!

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  13. A really wonderful collaboration George and Dena. Your styles compliment each other very well. Since I am a romanticist at heart this poem just made me ooh and ah. Thank you for sharing a well written piece with us here at Whispers.
    Love, Charlene

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    1. Ooh aahm pleased you liked our collaboration so much Charlene we certainly enjoyed writing it thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated

      George

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    2. Heyla Charlene!
      I always enjoy writing about love....there is much to be said when one is IN love!
      So glad you enjoyed our collaboration!
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours1

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  14. Dena and George, this poem has many wonderful images of the sea and the night sky. The ocean is so special to me, so your poem is special as well. Very nicely written! Carolyn

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    1. Thank you Carolyn for your kind comments I'm pleased we made the reading of our poem such a pleasure for you I've written one or two poems in a similar vein but Denas input gave this one an edge even I was pleased with thanks again for your comments they are very much appreciated!!

      God Bless

      George

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    2. Heyla Carolyn....
      I have always enjoyed watching the moon sparkle in the night water....
      So much energy....to absorb!
      Giorgio and I always enjoy each other's work....our collaboration....was well timed...and well enjoyed....before it was published!

      Thanks Giorgio....once again....for this opportunity...

      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!

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  15. Upon reading "Moonlight On The Shore," I am not only reminded of pleasant and joyous times, but I am also reminded of how blessed I am to be a part of this wonderful community of gifted poets! Great job on this collaboration, George and Dena. Great job. Continued blessings!

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
    www.tgbtgpublictions.com

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    1. I'm pleased you enjoyed reading this poem as much as you say you did Maurice and that you like all of our work not just by Dena and I but of everyone involved on the site Karen and Gayle should be rightly proud !!

      As for this poem I can only say thank you for your kind comments they are very much appreciated!

      God Bless

      George

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    2. Heyla Maurice!
      We are very pleased that you had a chance to read and review our work....
      There are soooooo many talented and Gifted writer's...
      I am always happy to see what my Quill drips!
      I enjoy what other's have to share as well...
      Their hearts and souls spill onto the page like fine silk...
      Thank you again for your precious review....
      Brightest Blessings to you and yours!

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