sleepless night-
the star i named after you
also falls
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departing geese-
he teaches me goodbye
in his mother tongue
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sakura petals...
the eloquence
of silence
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tucked up saree*
a paddy farmer
wades through clouds
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* a garment worn by Indian women
Arvinder Kaur is an Associate professor in English and Media Studies. She writes haiku both in Punjabi as well as English. She has four books to her credit which include poetry, a work of translation and her first collection of punjabi haiku, Nimolian. Her work has been published in several haiku journals and anthologies. She lives in Chandigarh with her family.
Oh, this is a wonderful quad of Haiku, so wonderfully written and expressed. Welcome to Whispers if this is your first posting. Haiku is so full of depth and it is a joy to read them, thank you for your poetry! Sheri
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ReplyDeleteIt is good to see you already have a lovely comment on your wonderful haiku. I agree with Sheri. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here.
Blessings,
Karen
Very nicely written haiku ,congratulations Arvinder,best wishes,angelee
ReplyDeleteKaren ,you have picked a fine I ndian poet to begin the month with,congratulations to you too angelee
Arvinder, welcome to Whispers and what a joy to read your wonderful Haiku. I especially liked the last one. The picture grabbed my mind. Thank you for choosing to share your talent with us here on Whispers.
ReplyDeleteCharlene
Beautiful verses Arvinder!
ReplyDeleteLovely quartet of haiku!
ReplyDeletewarm regards,
Alan
beautifullly woven verses!!
ReplyDeleteexcellent! welcome to whispers!
ReplyDeleteDear Arvinder,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here.
I love your choice of words and how it leads to the eloquence of these tiny texts.
Ali
Welcome to whispers, Arvinder! I enjoyed your string of haiku, especially the last two. All the best. // paul
ReplyDeleteArvinder,
ReplyDeleteSome nice haiku you have penned here. I loved the first two. Welcome!
Your new friend,
David Fox
just wonderful, thank you for this
ReplyDeleteLovely set of haiku Arvinder.
ReplyDeleteI love the "tucked up sari"
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Arvinder, welcome to Whispers. Thank you for the lovely haiku. I especially like the first one. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Loved the voices in native tongues. Thank you for your posting. Ralph
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