Joy of Spring
a sutra* written on mother's day
the bag of water
bursts within me
I am drenched
every two minutes
the pain so excruciating
a labour
white gloved hands
surround me . . . with each
gasp a grasping breath
cervical dilation
I sense a bundle press
for azadi
at corridor's end
my clenched fists release
the joy of spring birth
*sutra means thread in Sanskrit
*azadi - freedom
Previously published--Bottle Rockets # 28, February 2013
Kala Ramesh writes haiku, tanka, senryu, haibun and renku. She has over 1200 verses published in various reputed journals all over the world. As external faculty member of the Symbiosis International University, Kala conducts a 60-hour haiku module for undergraduates. Kala has initiated what she calls the "HaikuWALL India" project, where she gets school children and college students to paint haiku on walls. Kala is also the Modern Haiku Editor for Under the Basho & the Editor of “Youth Corner” for Cattails, a journal from United Haiku & Tanka Society.
this is so very beautiful
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Dear Kala,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Whispers! It is good to see you already have one lovely comment on your well-written poem. You are an accomplished and talented writer. Glad to have you a part of our poetry community. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Best wishes,
Karen
Thanks for this warm welcome, Karen
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Well done. well expressed.. best wishes Pete.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Peter. Happy you liked this sequence :)
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_kala
Excellent piece, welcome to Whispers Kala!
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Hi, Kala, this poem is a beautiful depiction of not only birth, but of many first moments experienced in a lifetime......... very poignant and wonderful to read. Sheri
ReplyDeleteThanks Sheri. Very true. I agree with you totally
DeleteThanks Sheri. Very true. I agree with you totally
DeleteKala,
ReplyDeleteA great sequence here. I have seen your name appear in just about every website that takes Japanese form poetry. I don't follow the print journals that publish them, as I am not as skilled in that area of writing. It is great to have someone of your stature on this site, I hope you will continue to post so we can see more of your excellent writing.
Sincerely yours,
David Fox
David.
DeleteIt's nice to be appreciated and thanks a million for your kind words.
_kala :)
well done!
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Deletenice, Kala, well done. . .
ReplyDeleteHello Kala. Welcome to Whispers and thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Continued blessings!
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Thanks a ton, Maurice
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A very insightful poem into life with all its trials and tribulations unforeseen, bringing forth a lasting image of spring. Thank you Kala and welcome! ....Leokadias
ReplyDeleteThanks Anielica. Really happy you like this sequence
DeleteA vivid and beautiful look at birth in all its wonder. Welcome to Whispers Kala. Aloha, Connie
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