The Fool (Octodil)
Fool that I am
I roam alone,
A ragged vagabond
Unaware of perils
That haunt the obscure paths of life;
Into the unknown I wander
Led by exuberance ...
A trump card up my sleeve.
Paul Callus is a Maltese author who writes both in Maltese and English. He has contributed to several anthologies. Apart from poetry he writes lyrics for songs and has published two books, one a story book aimed at children (related to his experience as a teacher) and a historical book based on research.
Nice work Paul.
ReplyDeleteThank you Peggy; glad you enjoyed. May you have a Happy Easter. // paul
Deletebetter to be an exuberant fool than a bitter wise man... Love this
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I love your lovely feedback, Maureen:) Happy Easter to you! // paul
DeleteI like this, Paul... adventurous!
ReplyDeleteAdventurous it is, Danny! Thank you for stopping by. // paul
DeleteHi, Paul, I read your poem as a metaphor to being realistic about the perils and downfalls of life. The loneliness would come in perhaps not trusting other human beings and sort of being an abstract in life.......... very interesting poem and perspective. Love your work! Sheri
ReplyDeleteYour insightful comments are a pleasure to read, Sheri! Thank you! Have a Blessed and Happy Easter! // paul
DeleteHi Paul...Nice poem! I think it's more foolish to never find out what's around the next bend. Thanks for sharing your interesting poem. Best Wishes, Chris~
DeleteThank you Christine. I like your insightful comment. All the best to you. // paul
DeleteAhhh a soul swimming in oblivion completely unaware of the coming tidal wave. I know someone like this. smile. Have a beautiful Easter Paul. Blessings, Connie
ReplyDeleteHello Connie! Sorry for the late reply! I hope your Easter was a blessed and happy one. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Deletelove this thoughtful write, Paul
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jack. Hope you're keeping well and busy. Regards // paul
DeleteLike this, Paul.
ReplyDeleteI am pleased that you enjoyed it, Ntchindi. Thank you for stopping by. // paul
DeleteHi Paul. This is a delightful poem. I liked reading and meditating upon it. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Many thanks to you, Maurice. Your comments are always appreciated. God bless. // paul
DeleteInsightful thoughts transcend the scene when we journey through life, opening the magic and the mystery, enlightening the soul of what is yet to be. Love your poem Paul. Blessings always, Leokadia
ReplyDeleteExcuse my late reply, Anielica; somehow this lovely comment escaped my attention! Your insightful feedback is appreciated. ~ May I wish you all the best for 2016! ~ Regards // paul
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ReplyDeleteI loved your poem when I first read it - searching online.
I ended up using The Fool as stimulus for a devised drama piece I created with grade 5 (9-10yrs) students.
Although the subject matter is profound and mature, it is also accessible for my students as a moral lesson about how a person can view/choose to live life.
Our final devised piece was called "Journey" and it followed the idea of a journey through life, where you have the power to contribute to your fate.
We also discussed how young people are often likely to be more "unaware of the perils" and thus can live and be led by exuberance - and whether this was a positive or negative. It was fantastic for them to engage in such ideas.
Thank you so much for the inspiration and your wonderful poem,
Faithfully,
Louisa
Thank you Louisa; I am so pleased that you liked my poem and put it to good use! For several years I also taught Grade 5 students, same age as yours, and I derived much satisfaction from it. They are at an age when they catch on much more than some might realize! From these few words I can tell that you are a dedicated teacher. Keep up the good work. ~ Wishing you a happy, peaceful and blessed new year. ~ paul
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