koi tattoo-
he dives into
the water
unaware of my
heart’s ripples
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foggy stars...
to see a mockingbird's
fading song
and hear the echo
of a frog's croak
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In a dream,
I saw a caged bird.
When I woke up,
you were near me
fluttering
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Rita Odeh is the author of seven books, including Buds of Dream which was released May 2014 and is available from Amazon. Her haiku and haiga have been honored with many awards. To read more of her poems, please go to Catching the Moment, http://rita-odeh.blogspot.com
Rita, these are wonderful Tanka! I love the depth, imagery and subject. Awesome! Sheri
ReplyDeletenice! I like your poetry. . .
ReplyDeleteNature transcends all beauty, a lovely dream indeed.
ReplyDeleteBlessings always, Leokadia
Hello Rita. I enjoyed your Tanka. Nice work. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
very nice, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteVery visual and delightful. Thanks Ron Grognet
ReplyDeleteThese are so good. Beautifully articulated. Thank you for sharing your talent. Ralph
ReplyDeleteHi Rita! This is a lovely string of Tanka; very creative. The first and third are my favourite ones. // paul
ReplyDeleteRita,
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I like all three, but the 2nd and 3rd are probably my favorites.
Your new friend,
David Fox