Saturday, January 20, 2018

Dream Too Real--By Jessica Swafford--United States

Dream Too Real

I bolted awake
breathless and scared
A blue flame vivid
from the heat stove
My dog growling
at something unseen
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5 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 21, 2018 at 4:31 AM

    Dear Jessica,

    You used a lot of imagery in just a few words. Well written.

    Best wishes,
    Inge

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  2. Jack HorneJanuary 21, 2018 at 5:45 AM

    wow, powerful imagery here

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  3. Karen O'LearyJanuary 23, 2018 at 8:19 PM

    Dear Jessica,

    I agree with Inge and Jack. Your well crafted multi-sense imagery gives the reader something to ponder about. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  4. Creative InspirationsJanuary 25, 2018 at 8:43 PM

    Hello Jessica. Welcome to Whispers. Thank you for your powerful, image-delicious poem, "Dream Too Real." I enjoyed it. Continued blessings to you!

    MJ (www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)

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  5. pdfrenchFebruary 4, 2018 at 9:25 AM

    i enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it with us.

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