Thursday, January 4, 2018

Friends--By Linda Imbler--United States

Friends

We sit here face-to-face,
assembling Lego pieces
of a fairytale broken world,
as we talk about
the real one we live in. 
A world more fractured
than what we, at this moment, build.
We hope we’ll have more time
to use our dreams
to repair our own.

8 comments:

  1. Dear Linda,

    I love the comparion of building with the Lego pieces and our broken world. A well written piece.

    Best wishes,
    Inge

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  2. Passionate and heart-felt, Linda. Takes me back to good thoughts....thoughts of a world that will one day be all God created it to be. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!

    -MJ
    www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you for your beautiful response to my work.

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  3. Dear Linda,

    Congratulations on the two insightful comments that you have already received at Whispers. Welcome! I hope you continue to share your poetry for our journal/community.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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    1. Thank you very much, Karen. I am honored to be here.

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  4. Linda,
    A splendid poem. I really liked it!
    Your new friend,
    David Fox

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