Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Duo Dancer--By Eleanor Michael--United States

Duo Dancer

I dance
with partner
or without.
Alone,
I lead.
With partner,
I follow.
Together
is better.

Eleanor Michael has published poetry and short stories in a variety of venues.

10 comments:

  1. Oh how beautiful! I immediately went to thoughts of 'dancing with God'. Truly that is the best way to live life. He leads I follow. Excellent poem that truly touched my heart. Thank you so much.
    Love, Charlene

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  2. gorgeous poem. twists and turns, stops and starts in a few well chosen words. thank you for sharing, Ralph

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  3. loved this spare but wonderful poem, I agree together is better

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  4. Oh yes Eleanor. A warm body beats empty arms. Lovely poem.

    love,
    Kathy

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  5. Nice poem, Eleanor. I am not a very good dancer, but I agree that "together is better." Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
    www.tgbtgpublictions.com

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  6. Hello, Kathryn, to me your words are a great and definitive metaphor of life and blended into a beautiful warm and poetic picture. Beautifully written and expressed! Sheri

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  7. Thank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following comment--

    Simply beautiful! Blessings, Connie

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  8. Thank you, Carolyn Devonshire, for the following comment--

    Your poem touched a special place in my heart, Eleanor. Yes, dancing "together" is better, but even those who are alone need to dance and enjoy life. Touching! Best wishes, Carolyn Devonshire

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  9. So touching your poetry - yes, touches my heart. I feel spiritual relief reading your words. Gentle and soul soothing...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  10. Thank you everyone for these lovely comments for Eleanor. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem from a talented writer and friend. Eleanor, I hope you enjoy all your comments. Wishing you continued success with all your writing endeavors.

    Karen

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