The Permanence of Art
In the third act
a recital of a dream
Beauty transcribes it, punctuating it,
entering when the poet is out
for a moment
The song, a promise from a meadow
begins with bird notes.. a real masterpiece
viewed as poetry begins
and makes a parody of song
Authorship of the song is sung
as an impulse, love
and youthful ardor,
the poet discourses on the
permanence of art.
Suzanne Delaney is a retired Registered Nurse. A resident of Hawaii, USA she was born in Tasmania. She now has time to pursue her passion for writing poetry, creating collages and for traveling.
A beautiful poem, Suzanne! Sometimes, indeed, it is the little things around us that bring the inspiration. Life is an art! Life can be great inspiration if we look at life in a positive mode.......... thanks for sharing a lovely poem! It is always great reading you at Whispers! Sheri at: www.poetryandbeyond.net
ReplyDeleteHi Sheri: Thankyou for your beautiful comments.
DeleteYou always make my day,
Yours in poetry, SuZ
Suzanne what a lovely poem and I enjoyed the read as I love painting pictures in my mind of words spoken. I could do that well with your poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us here on Whispers. You are a blessing.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene
Charlene:
DeleteThankyou for your thoughtful comment and encouragement.
It is my pleasure to share and read the work here on Whispers.
Hugs,
SuZ
Dear Suzanne,
ReplyDeleteI love the way your poem began in the "third act," when the pieces of a play (or a poem) come together with a resolute message. Inspiration can come from many places, but it is the poet, the artist, who bring it to life. Beautifully written!
Love,
Carolyn
Dear Caroline:
DeleteThank you for your kind comment and for understanding
my poem.
Without appreciative readers the purpose of our writing is reduced.
I appreciate you.
Hugs,
SuZ
Another enjoyable poem from you, Suzanne. I love your depth and fashioning of words as well as your ability to get the reader engulfed in what they are reading. Thank you for sharing your talent. Continued blessings!
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Dera Maurice:
DeleteLife has been so busy for me lately but it
is like stepping into a peaceful space here at Whispers and finding friends like you adds to the calm.
Blessings,
SuZ
I love the way you transcend images through your poetic words Suzanne. As I read each line thoughts evolve to the treasures you are collecting for a poetic painting. Blessings always. Leokadia
ReplyDeleteHello Leokadia:
DeleteThanks for taking the time to comment in such a sweet and positive way.
I am so thrilled you enjoyed my poem.
Hugs,
SuZ
Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following--
ReplyDeleteloved this thoughtful piece