Gaining Wisdom (Triodyne)
Darkness brightens the light
Experiencing bad brings out the good
Knowing the difference is wisdom
Yancy’s Challenge--Try a Triodyne
(note--you can submit your poems
in the comment section below)
Yancy's new style of poetry
Title--One word or phrase
Three lines to define title
Rhyme--A-b-b or free style
Syllable count--with or with out, your choice
Meter--With or with out, your choice
Yancy Lee Dalton is a published writer from Colorado.
Hello, Yancy! Your triodyne is an interesting creation. Glad about the brevity, too. I will give it a go, I think......... thanks for the privilege of reading you here on Whispers!
ReplyDeleteGoing To The Mall ( Yancy's Triodyne, I think )....
Shopping is fun
Paying once; paying twice
When you wear poorly fitting shoes
Don't know if I did this correctly, but it is fun trying.......... Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
Sheri, it sure looks right to me. :) Good going!
DeleteLove, Charlene
Good triodyne S Sta, I enjoyed the humor
DeleteWow, Yancy, a great new form, Triodyne, and a great poem. Thanks for sharing your talent.
ReplyDeleteCharlene
Thank you Charlene, I enjoy your observance
DeleteNice work, Yancy. Continued blessings!
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Thanks Maurice
DeleteHere's my Triodyne Yancy. Thanks for providing this form for us to work with.
ReplyDeleteGood Friends
fabric woven tightly
by the gift of love
always standing strong
By Karen O'Leary
Good one Karen
DeleteKaren (Triodyne)
DeleteKaren's become a gift of love
Labors for others like God above
A kind, patient compassionate dove
Yancy
We say tightly knit friends, such as this woven fabric; very well described, Karen. // paul
ReplyDeleteI agree with what you stated Paul
DeleteAhh, knowing the difference between bad and good surely represents wisdom, Yancy.
ReplyDeleteThe Triodyne has some of the qualities of a Sijo.
She
she lived for laughs and smiles, to offer hope, joy.
we shared Native art, dreams, theater.
she loved River Dance, snow ball fights, horses, Richard Gere, me.
Thanks Carolyn, I enjoyed She
DeleteA lovely poem with the experience of life's lessons that teach us Yancy. I love your form. Blessings, Connie
ReplyDeleteThanks Great teacher and leader Conne
DeleteConnie (Triodyne)
DeleteConnie is poetry writing Queen
She writes well about anything
Owns PFT, where we write & dream
Yancy
Yancy,
ReplyDeleteThis Triodyne is excellent! It is so clear and so powerful a statement. Love reading it.
Pam
Thank you Pam
ReplyDeleteTriodyne
ReplyDeleteTears
Eye Water flowing
As strong emotional dam breaks
Draining inner well
Triodyne
ReplyDeletePessimist
A person who feels bad, when he feels good.
Having the nagging fear that
He'll feel worse, when he feels better
Triodyne
ReplyDeleteOptimist
A person who feels good when he feel bad
Assuring power of positive thinking.
Renders illness as non destructive
Your words fill the heart and roll gently off the tongue, drifting quietly into memory. Emile.
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