sun’s rays
through bare branches
on my pillow --
I still feel his
warmth
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tattered cirrus clouds
stretch
over a hill top--
we climb holding
hand in hand
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burgeoning
December fog
on the room window --
blow my breath
to write his name
_______________
Archana Kapoor Nagpal is an internationally published author of 6 books so far, and her winning stories are now part of international anthologies. She writes inspirational content for corporate newsletters, websites, blogs and print publications. Her inspirational poems touch every area of a person's life. She enjoys writing Haiku and Tanka as well. Visit her Amazon Author Profile to know more about her.
Hello, Archana! Beautiful Tanka written with much expression and heartfelt emotion! I love reading these because one has to know what they are intending for the end-result to have a meaning and intention to the reader. A very creative trio of Tanka you have presented. So good always to read you here at Whispers! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your encouraging words.
DeleteHi Archana,
ReplyDeleteLovely images in these heartfelt Tanka. I enjoyed reading all of them. Thank you for sharing them with us.
Sandra Stefanowich
Thanks Sandra. Your words give me courage to write more often!
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ReplyDeleteDear Archana,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for all the encouraging comments you have been leaving for other writers. It is people like you that make Whispers possible.
Blessings,
Karen
Thanks Karen! I like to leave a comment so that Whispers can grow faster and with great poetry at an international platform.
DeleteEnjoyed your tanka poetry Archana! It's so graceful! Thank you for sharing such lovely words. ~Chris
ReplyDeleteThanks Christine!
Deletevery nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Akila dear!
DeleteArchana, These are so beautiful and utterly romantic. I pictured myself in each one.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Archana. I am not that familiar with this style, but I do like it. Thanks for sharing. Continued blessings!
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Thanks for the lovely message and sending your blessings.
DeleteRegards,
Archana
HI Archana! congrats on three expressive tanka; each contains a formidable pivot. much enjoyed. // paul
ReplyDeleteThanks Paul. I am happy to know you enjoyed reading my work.
DeleteHi Archana,
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift for painting beautiful imagery with your pen! It's not surprising that you've had six books published and are very active in many venues of the international writing community. Excellent work!
Best wishes,
Carolyn
Thanks a lot Carolyn. I feel so much honoured!
DeleteThank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following--
ReplyDeleteLovely images, Arachana.
Suzanne