seamless sky …
petals fell in the tinkling
of chimes
Simply Haiku, Winter 2013
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fragrant breeze …
the shiver of new leaves
in morning dew
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smell of rain …
a dream unfolds in the chatter
of sparrows
Simply Haiku, Summer 2013
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blue monarch ...
scent of a dream
on your wings
Butterfly Dreams, Feb 2013
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la vie en rose …
through bare branches
the song of spring
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Asni Amin is from sunny Singapore. She works as a librarian full time and writes haiku for the love of it, after getting hooked on it in early 2012. Some of her haiku/tanka/haiga have been published in Simply Haiku, Under the Basho, Daily Haiga, Lynx, Moonbathing Journal, Manichi Japan, etc. Asni won first place in the Second Edition Haiku Contest organised by the Romanian Kukai Group, Sharpening The Green Pencil in April 2013. She has a haiku blog, A Walk In Haiku, http://awalkinhaiku.wordpress.com
There is a lovely innocence about your words: each sound and site as if seen and heard for the first time. Very much enjoyed. Best wishes Ralph.
ReplyDeleteAsni, your Haiku presentation is so lovely and gentle as it defines so beautifully. I love them all and even in the elegance and simplicity, what it defines is so pronounced and punctuates each so eloquently! Beautifully written! Sheri www.poetryandbeyond.net
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing such creative images with us! I love all five of these remarkable haiku.
Blessings,
Carolyn
Thank you, Karen, for posting these haiku here. Thank you, too, Ralph, She and Carolyn for your kind comments. I enjoyed writing them and am happy that you appreciate them.
ReplyDeleteWarm regards,
Asni
Dear Asni,
ReplyDeleteIt's a pleasure to publish your wonderful haiku here at Whispers. Hope you will continue to be a part of this online journal/poetry community. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Karen
Hi Asni,
ReplyDeleteWow! These are all beautifully written haiku. I enjoyed reading all of them and loved the images you created as I pictured each one. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and hope to see more in the future.
Sandra Stefanowich
Nice haiku, Asni. Thank you for sharing with us and continued blessings!
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Hi Asni! These are excellent haiku which appeal with delicate tenderness to the senses. Thank you for sharing! // paul
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