Unspoken Words
I often scribble in the sand
The words I find so hard to say
And hope the wind will come along
And blow them all your way.
Paul Callus is a Maltese author who writes both in Maltese and English. He has contributed to several anthologies. Apart from poetry he writes lyrics for songs and has published two books, one a story book aimed at children (related to his experience as a teacher) and a historical book based on research.
Short but sweet. I enjoyed it very much. Well done. take care. Pete.
ReplyDeleteHi Pete! Seems like you are the very first to comment on my poem. Thank you. So glad that you like it. Hope to be seeing you around. Paul
DeleteHi, there, Paul, welcome to Whispers! I love your poem because it comes as nostalgic to me, with a bitter sweetness that we all have known at one time or another. It kind of echoes in the brevity, too. Beautifully written! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheri, both for the lovely welcome and for your comments. I'm pleased that you find this poem to your liking! Paul
DeleteDear Paul,
ReplyDeleteI can remember many times when I wrote words and wished they could be carried to a loved one who was no longer in my life. When you write them in the sand, the tide carries them away, yet we still hope they have reached that special person. This is so beautifully crafted, Paul. You have an amazing talent and it is my pleasure to welcome you to Whispers.
Love, joy and blessings,
Carolyn
Thank you Carolyn for the welcome and encouraging comments.! As long as words are formed in the mind and heart, I believe that somehow the message gets passed on to those who are no longer with us. Take care and God bless:) // paul
DeleteThank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--
ReplyDeletelovely thoughts indeed
Dear Paul,
ReplyDeleteYou captured so much in just four lines. So good to see you getting some wonderful comments already. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Best wishes,
Karen
Thank you Karen! The welcoming atmosphere is just right! Should not take me long to find my feet. Don't worry...will be knocking at your door if the need arises:) Regards...paul
DeleteI love the poem. You must write it on a rock on a beach somewhere! and surprise someone who finds your words! :-) Ralph
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the poem, Ralph! Yours is a good idea:) Hope to see you around. .... paul
DeleteHi Paul,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Whisper's! I enjoyed reading your poem today so much said in this short verse. Sometimes it is indeed hard to find those words you really want to say to someone. Thank you for sharing and hope to see more of your poetry in the future.
Sandra Stefanowich
Thank you Sandra...both for the nice welcome and the lovely comments. Will be stopping by to read your posts :) cu // paul
DeleteHi Paul, Your lovely poem speaks volumes. Thanks for sharing! ~Chris
ReplyDeleteHi Christine! Thank you for the encouraging comments:) will be back to you....paul
DeleteVery nice, Paul!
ReplyDeleteThank you Terry...glad to make your acquaintance! // paul
DeleteHi Paul. Nice read. Thanks for sharing. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
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Hi Maurice! Glad you found my little contribution to your liking. cu around and God bless! // paul
DeletePaul thank you for sharing your talent and a very well written poem that spoke so much to my soul tool.
ReplyDeleteNot being brave enough to speak my mind in my early years, I could not even write my thoughts in the sand, but buried them deep. Only in my later life did I found a way to express my deepest thoughts. Poetry is the venue that has filled my need to communicate what is truth for me. My desires and hopes to make a difference in a world that is ever seeking truth, would not be possible had I not ventured to express myself through the creative medium of poetry, but whether I help someone else or not, writing poetry has been a tremendous help to myself.
Charlene
Good day Charlene! (well, over here in Malta time is 12.20pm) I appreciate your honest comments. May your writings always be beneficial to you and to those who may benefit through them. Looking forward to reading your work. // paul
DeleteWelcome to Whispers Paul, I know the depth of your poetry from reading other poems of yours. Your talent shines bright in anything you write Paul. This poem is
ReplyDeleteexceptional because in its brevity it reveals the feelings most of us have in our hearts and minds that we may not be able to convey. It is beautiful and inspiring. Blessings, Connie
Thank you Connie, especially for the most lovely comments that you posted here! They are much appreciated :) I know of a Connie from Hawaii (could be the same?). // paul
ReplyDeletePaul, so beautifully written.
ReplyDeletePam
Thank you Pam; so glad you like it! Hope to see you around. // paul
ReplyDeleteA spell you cast upon the sand
ReplyDeleteReleasing the words to the wind
Unspoken words written by your hand
The negative will soon rescind
I really enjoyed this Paul....you have captured the essence....with full imagery....
Thank you for this share....
Brightest Blessings to you and yours!
Wow! Aria...what a lovely way to comment! Your words cast a spell on me! Thank you...I much appreciate your encouraging comments. Take care // paul
DeleteThank you, Eleanor Michael, for the following--
ReplyDeleteGood. The things we have to say that we do have words for, but not the opportunity or perhaps the courage to speak.
Thank you Eleanor; there are times when words do not come easy...as you say could also be because of lack of courage...shyness. // paul
DeleteThank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following--
ReplyDeleteHi Paul! your poem, "Unspoken Words", in a way, reminds me of the song from years ago called "Love Letters in the Sand". It was a hit and so is your poem!
Thank you Gerald...you are too kind! So glad you enjoyed. "Love Letters in the Sand" is a beautiful song, too. // paul
DeleteThank you, John Williams, for the following--
ReplyDeleteHow spirited and touched words would be if words we want to say could reach others. Maybe those we care so much about could better understand our hearts. Thank you. Nice thoughts.
Hi John! In life there are times when we feel unable to express what we feel, especially when being face to face. When we are on our own words seem to flow better! Thank you for your nice visit. // paul
DeleteHi paul can you please interpret your poem because we need to write it in technical writing..
ReplyDeletePlease thank you
Hi...I will reply in private if you contact me on twitter or FB under P.a.callus
DeleteThis is so wonderful to read, Paul! Wow! I'm glad this student selected your poem to help him or her in writing. What a tribute to you my friend.
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Karen
Thank you, Karen In fact this is the 3rd or 4th student asking for a helping hand (even on twitter); maybe they all come from the same class! Glad this one found his/her way to Whispers. Regards // paul
DeleteDear Paul,
DeleteI'm open to new writers as you already know. New writers often go to public posting sites where everything they write is "good job." A lot of misinformation is generated at these sites so new writers get a skewed view of what the current market trends are and what goes into well-written poetry. I'm so glad they have your voice and your poetry as an example for them to start their journeys.
Blessings,
Karen