Crossroads
She’s standing in her room
A rare morning
She no longer lives here . . . just visiting.
I soak up her warmth
Watch her get ready for her day
Perched in her doorway, coffee in hand.
Light pours into the room
Her highlights glisten
I remind her she’s beautiful.
She smiles
Tilts her head
I wonder
Where has the time gone . . .
Peggy Dugan French is a California girl with Minnesota roots. She has enjoyed being the editor of Shemom since 1997. She has worn many hats over the years, but being a Mom has been one of her greatest adventures; she’s had the pleasure of sharing that journey with her best friend.
Beautiful poem, I liked very much, mainly the last two lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you Edilson!
ReplyDeleteI love this poem, especially the last four lines. Nice work, Peggy. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Thank you Maurice, appreciate the kind words.
ReplyDeletelove it -very clever write here
ReplyDeleteThanks Jack!
ReplyDeleteYou paint a picture for us.
ReplyDeleteThanks Joan!
DeleteI enjoyed: her soaking up her warmth.... nice line
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat!
DeleteThank you, John Polselli, for the following--
ReplyDeletePeggy, this is a very bittersweet and beautiful poem you've written. Such a powerful closing line that speaks volumes! Thank you for the experience.
Thanks for your comment John, glad the piece spoke to you.
DeleteThank you, Richard Sponaugle, for the following--
ReplyDeleteSo true--where has time gone? Provokes excellent imagery, like I'm almost there.
Thanks a lot, really appreciate your comments Richard!
DeleteThank you, Barbara Siekierski, for the following--
ReplyDeleteA nice poem about remembering a daughter that used to live at home and moved out and have memories of her.