My
Fragile Friends
Please speak to me my lovely
friend
With leaves stirred softly by
the wind
Under enchanted autumn sky
Where your susurrate sounds
drift by.
Sing soft melodies in choir
As leaves glow as if on fire.
I feel your abject dying pain
When wet and cold from
chilling rain.
I remember spring at your
birth,
How you brightened verdant
earth.
And then in summer your soft
shade
Where under your cool leaves
I laid.
You always spoke or sang to
me
While holding close your
mother tree.
But now in autumn's silver
sky
Soft spoken leaves whisper
goodbye.
Connie Marcum Wong has been
the Web Mistress of a private poetry forum Poetry for Thought since
October 1999. Her poetry has been in many publications, anthologies, magazines,
and e-zines over the years. She published her first poetry chapbook, Island
Creations in 2005. In 2007, Heart Blossoms was published. In January
2010, an anthology, A Poetry Bridge to All Nations, was published by
Lulu Enterprises, Inc. Connie created the 'Constanza' poetry form in 2007 and Con-Verse form in 2010.
She has resided with her husband in Hawaii since 1980.
Dear Connie,
ReplyDeleteI'm proud to be your first comment on your lovely poem full of color and sound. You touche all 4 seasons through a truly unique creation decorated by line-ending rhymes that fit without being "forced." Please send another soon.
Michael
Thank you Michael for such a lovely comment. I appreciate that you enjoy my poetry. Aloha, Connie
DeleteHi Connie, very much enjoyed this personification, am going walking shortly on a hike in a forest filled with Norway & White Pine, I share your reverence for trees! james marshall goff
ReplyDeleteThank you very much James. I can't count how many pictures of trees I have taken over the years. Aloha, Connie
DeleteVery pretty poem for fall. Trees are special.
ReplyDeleteIt's a beautiful poem! I love the vivid imagery it presents, the precise and bright depiction of the natural world.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Claudia. I checked out your blog and it's very lovely. I adore Haiku. Aloha, Connie
DeleteHi Connie, I love this vividly expressed tribute to leaves that 'journey' through seasons' passage. Such is our life journey! Warm regards // paul
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Paul. Trees always inspire me. Blessings, Connie
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