NOVEMBER'S THIRD
SPECIAL FEATURE
COLLABORATIVE POEM
COLLABORATIVE POEM
embers
By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French
the campfire faded away
the stars now our steady companion
an owl hooting in the forest
serenades us
with gossip of far-journeying winds
stirring up long ago dreams
of a home full of caring and loved ones
smiling we slip into the night
Dear ayaz and Peggy,
ReplyDelete"gossip of far-journeying winds" is quite unique.
One special feature in a special collaboration.
Thank you!
Michael
you have a fine day today, Michael. . .
Deletethank you Michael!
DeleteSpeaks to our hearts today, the owl stirring up long ago dreams of a home, caring and loving.
ReplyDeletethank you for combining your powerful words Azaz and Peggy.
our best to you, friend Jo...
DeleteThank you Jo, so glad you liked the piece!!
DeleteWell said, ayaz daryl and Peggy.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Marianne
Deletethank you, Marianne,
ReplyDeletebest of everything to all your endeavors
it's all Peggy's fault! (and Karens!)
ReplyDeleteha ha
DeleteSo, how do I share in this fault! Ha! Ha! I'll just be happy to have the opportunity to share your words--now, I'm running for cover.
DeleteChuckling in West Fargo,
Karen
Ayaz and Peggy, I love the peaceful feeling your imagery expresses in this lovely collaboration. Aloha, Connie
ReplyDeletethank you, Connie, this day is much nicer because of your gracious words... best to you!
DeleteThank you Connie, so appreciate your kind words!
DeleteThe lovely images you create through your words are so soothing and caressing. I really love the idea of peace and inner fulfillment your evocative verse depicts and brings about, in particular in the last two lines of the poem where the sensation of calm and reassurance are conveyed and accompanied by the alliteration "smiling we slip". Beautiful Poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your very kind words Claudia, I am so glad you liked the poem! Best to you!
Deletethank you, Claudia, have a fine tomorrow (and thereafter!)
DeleteAyaz and Peggy,
ReplyDeleteA beautiful collaboration. I loved it!
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you David, best to you!
DeleteHello Peggy and Ayaz,
DeleteI often hear an owl hooting in the nearby park. On Monday it is supposed to be the biggest moon of the year. I know when I look at the night sky that night, I will have a copy of your poem folded in my pocket. Thank you for such a treasure. Best wishes for you both.
heartfelt thanks, friend David. . .
DeleteWow, thank you for this Annie, I agree with ayaz, one of the nicest compliments my work has received. Enjoy the moon and night sky!
DeleteAnnie, that the nicest compliment I've ever had. . .
ReplyDeletecomplete with auditory, visual and olfactory senses! lovely piece!
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