The Summer Is Past
A
leaf
falls
from
the
tree
and
I
feel
its
lonely
trip
down
J. T. Milford is a
retired CPA who has just completed his first book of poetry.
Dear J. T.
ReplyDeleteWonderful shape poem! It reminds of a similar poem by e.e.cummings. However, cummings' shape poem tracks straight downward.
Blessings,
Michael
Thank you for your kind comment. To be remotely compared to e. e. cummings is a big step up for me. I try to keep writing. Thanks
DeleteI loved this, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThat you loved the poem is the best thank you I can receive. Thank you for your comment.
DeleteAh, great one! Ralph
ReplyDeleteRalph hope you liked the poem. I just write what happens to hit me. Thank you for your comment.
DeleteI really get the feeling of a leaf falling.
ReplyDeleteTo know you received the feelings in the poem is your thank you. I thank you for your kind comment.
DeleteJ.T. I enjoyed "The Summer Is Past." I also love the creative way in which you shared it with us. I also envision that "leaf's lonely trip down." Beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Thank you for your kind comments. That you felt the emotion in the poem is the best thanks. Sorry I am late answering Was in the hospital for six days. My best wishes and blessings for you.
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