Last week, I built a
time-machine,
and, first, I traveled back
to see
the dinosaurs upon the Earth;
they tried to eat or trample
me!
Such fun to set the clock and
then
I'd whoosh through time, from
age to age:
I saw the Romans, Vikings,
Celts,
and witnessed Shakespeare on
the stage.
I longed to be with you
again;
I'd travel back and there I'd
stay...
my memories and what I saw
were quite at odds, like
night and day.
I realised that in my mind
I'd changed the past; my love
was blind.
Jack Horne enjoys reading and
writing poetry. He is Whispers' Activity
Features Editor.
Dear Jack,
ReplyDeleteI would like to travel through a time machine once as long as I'm sure I find my way back. Your journey through the ages learned you a lesson at last. Well written my friend.
Love
Inge
Hi Jack,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good one, whimsical but very clever as well. I really like the way you adopted the sonnet structure but changed the rhyme scheme.
Clever, concise, in need of being put to music... I love this, Jack.
ReplyDeleteI almost joined you, but you sauntered by moments before I could take in the Egyptian pyramids! A good poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the lovely comments
ReplyDeleteHi Jack. "Time Machine" is a beautiful poem. I loved reading it. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ
(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
Glad that your time machine is in good working order, Jack! A very pleasant poem with a superb ending. Regards // paul
ReplyDeleteI like this imaginative writing Jack. I loved the ending. Keep your talent posting.
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