You...
Are a star shining bright
I am earth, forever bound
to gaze upon your light
And I have seen your soul
In all my dreams
Pure as the snow
on moonlit beams
And I have loved you...
All of time
Knowing always,
you were never mine...
For I am the wind,
the rain and ocean tides
And you...you are the
golden dawn of sunrise
Still...I whisper
your name into the night
and make a wish for you,
my star, my light
Lynn Long is a poet, writer, aspiring novelist, daydreamer
and believer in the impossible. She is a ontributing artist @hitRECord.org and
Scriggler.com Lynn has been published in
various publications such as Stanzaic
Stylings, Antarctica Journal and PPP
Ezine. For more of her poetry see https://zolanymph1.blogspot.com/
The interplay between two lovers is wonderfully expressed through the pairs star/earth, wind/sunrise. The intense longing is expressed in a few, well-chosen words. Brava!
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much!! @Arthur Turfa :)
DeleteThis is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you! <3 Rachel
Deletelovely romantic poem here
ReplyDeleteThank you!! I appreciate your words @Jack Horne
DeleteHi Lynn,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your poem about an unreachable star, the comparison is very creative. Lovely write.
Best wishes,
Inge
Thank you so very much! @Daginne Aigenend 😊😊
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, Lynn. Love it. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ
(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
Thank you!! So much appreciated! Blessing to you as well :)
DeleteI really enjoyed the personification displayed so eloquently in this well written beautiful poem. Such emotion it generates.
ReplyDeleteSincerely,Charlene
@Charlene Thank you for your kinds words :) Sincerely, Lynn
DeleteVery good Lynn, as I read this words popped into my head, Silent Lover. I think this happens a lot in mortality.
ReplyDeleteKnight Writer
Thank you so very much! @Knight Writer :) I believe this too...
DeleteYou write Lynn,
DeleteKeep up the good work.
Knight Writer
:) @KnightWriter
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