Christmas Greeting
The sun woke on Christmas;
David tumbled from his bed.
He scrambled down the stairs
and ran past the sparkling tree.
He did not stop to check
out the presents piled high.
David knelt before the stable
his grandpa carved years before
And spread his favorite blanket
out on the wooden floor.
He gently lifted the baby
with his little toddler hands.
He swaddled the small figure
in the flannel at his knees.
He hugged the Christ-like image
in his short, chubby arms.
“Happy Birthday Jesus!”
then sang the birthday song.
Karen O'Leary is a freelance writer/editor from West Fargo, ND. Her
poetry, short stories, and articles have been published in a variety of
venues. She released her first book of poetry in 2011 called Whispers... published by A.P.F. Publisher. Their second project, Snippets...an anthology of short verse,
contains poetry from 73 talented writers from across the world and was
released in 2012. Karen is a member of The Writers and Poetry Alliance
and the Haiku Society of America.
Karen, beautiful poem. The timing is good too.
ReplyDeleteDear Ndaba,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this lovely comment and your ongoing support. Your encouragement means a lot to me. It's writers like you that make Whispers possible. Merry Christmas!
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, Linda Hurdwell, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteHow cute, these words represent a ‘real’ Christmas.
Dear Lin,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your lovely comment and your ongoing encouragement. It is people like you that make Whispers possible. Merry Christmas!
Blessings,
Karen
Oh how delightful your poem. I could just picture the child so lovingly cradling the baby Jesus and singing Happy Birthday. Thank you for the sweet feeling I received as I read this precious poem.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene
Dear Charlene,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your lovely comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate your ongoing encouragement. Merry Christmas!
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Karen,
ReplyDeleteGod bless you for this reminder of the true meaning of Christmas. How refreshing it is to think young people understand that the birth of Christ is what we truly celebrate -- not gifts or toys. David is a bright, sensitive boy. What a wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn Devonshire
Dear Carolyn,
ReplyDeleteYou are such a light in my life, always encouraging me with your lovely comments and supporting me in other ways too. What a gift that is. Blessings to you too as we celebrate Christ's birth and the salvation of mankind. I appreciate this comment more than I can express. Thank you for all the wonderful comments you left for others today. You and others like you make Whispers possible.
Karen
So sweet - a great visual bringing the reader into the scene with David. Christmas is a glorious time of year - as we all remember our Savior's Birth...
ReplyDeleteRhoda Galgiani
Thank you so much for your kind words, Rhoda. What a blessing you are in my life. Have a wonderful Christmas my friend! I hope your New Year is filled with joy.
ReplyDeleteKaren
And what a wonderful greeting this poem is. You express this so creatively. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDelete-MJ
Dear Maurice,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words. Wow! Just got back from celebrating Christmas with extended family to see all the wonderful comments you left for others. What a blessing your support and encouragement are. Have a wonderful New Year my friend!
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteI loved your heart-warming poem too, Karen. What a sweet picture that conjured up!
Dear Jack,
ReplyDeleteWishing you a wonderful New Year! Thank you for your kind comment and ongoing encouragement. Your support means a lot to me my friend.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, Robert Dufresne, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteKaren, I read this one over several times and each time I felt and recognized "true Christmas" again. The innocence of the babe and the joy and innocence and glee of a toddler at JESUS come to me; for the Kingdom of Heaven is made of such as these" and David sang out in the Joy and wisdom of the Babe. A beautiful title and a beautiful poem. Thanks for making my Christmas again.
Bob D
Dear Bob,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely comment. It means a lot to me. What a blessing you are here at Whispers. Thank you for your ongoing support and encouragement. Wishing a New Year filled with joy!
Karen
Thank you, Eleanor Michael, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteYour poem creates an endearing image.
Eleanor
Dear Eleanor,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comment. You have been so good about supporting me over the years. It's so good to have you a part of Whispers.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following comments--
ReplyDeleteDear Karen, thank you for enjoying my poem. Your poem, "Christmas Greeting," proves what real Christmas is all about thru' the innocence of a child. A great little poem!
Dear Gerald,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for this lovely comment. I appreciate your ongoing support and encouragement. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteKaren-what a lovely way of conveying that Christmas is the Birth of Jesus!
Dear Suzanne,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words. Jesus should be the center of the celebration--glad you feel that way too.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, John Williams, for the following comments--
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem which creates a warm atmosphere of the purpose of Christmas. How wonderful and meaningful it would be if more people looked at Christmas through David's eyes. I am always inspired by your heartfelt words.
Dear John,
ReplyDeleteFor years we have been following each other's writing. I appreciate your kind words and all the encouragement you have given me in my writing journey. What a blessing you are my friend.
Karen