Friday, January 17, 2014

Caught--By Janet Vick--United States

Caught

Caught...
In a weaver’s web
dyed with confusion.

Doubt
created knots,
a grand delusion.

Fear
connected spirals,
wild illusions...

Peace
rekindled Faith,
prayer resolution.

Janet lives in rural Suffolk, Virginia with her husband, Randy. She loves the fresh air and space of country living. She works as a Registered Nurse in surgery. She is a mother of one and grandmother of two.
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9 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:29 AM

    I love the poetic breakdown of these "emotions" and the outcome isn't inevitable, either, based on one's faith and positivity. These reactions, if you will, overcome all of us and the beautiful thing is that these are another step to being who we are and they make us stronger. Great poem! Sheri

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  2. Lisa DJanuary 17, 2014 at 11:01 AM

    I can feel the knotting up, the spiraling fear...then the final peace. Well done! And I love that your resolution is prayer. Perfect! Beautifully composed. Edifying for the soul. Love it! Lisa

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  3. Karen O'LearyJanuary 17, 2014 at 12:51 PM

    Dear Janet,

    Congratulations on the two lovely comments you have already received. Welcome to Whispers. I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Nice to have you with us.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  4. CharleneJanuary 17, 2014 at 8:26 PM

    Welcome to Whispers Janet. You are going to love it here. As for your poetic definitions of some emotions that seem to never let go and the resolution to those
    troublesome yet natural responses to negativity, is truly inspiring. Thank you for sharing your talent and sweet spirit. I could feel it in this poem.
    Love, Charlene

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  5. UnknownJanuary 19, 2014 at 4:38 AM

    I want to thank all of you for your welcome and lovely comments on my writing. It is greatly appreciated. Janet

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2014 at 8:35 AM

    Nice work, Janet. Thank you for sharing. Hope to read more of your poems. Continued blessings!

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
    www.tgbtgpublictions.com

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  7. UnknownJanuary 25, 2014 at 5:15 PM

    Very creative Janet and a pleasure to read. Robert

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  8. Kathryn CollinsJanuary 28, 2014 at 5:56 AM

    Janet -

    Oh how I love "caught in a weaver's web dyed in confusion" and the grand conclusion in peace.

    love,
    Kathy

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  9. Rhoda GalgianiFebruary 1, 2014 at 6:19 PM

    Your writing abilities are alway grand to read. A gentle nature always seems to come through your words...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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