Misty Flats
Wandering the misty flats,
searching high and low;
what do I seek, here and there,
I do not even know.
Something pulls my soul to roam
the meadows far and wide;
a constant ache deep within,
a need I cannot hide.
Her mystery speaks to me,
dark secrets are revealed;
upon the moors, solitude,
where heart and mind are healed.
As I wander misty flats,
your presence feels so near;
alone I walk, wrapped in love,
with nothing more to fear.
Dedicated to my father who passed away January 13, 2011
Kristina resides in Ormond Beach, Fl with her husband and three pets. She enjoys writing and spending time with her husband.
Oh! I am so elated to read your awesome writings once again. Losing someone we love is so difficult and yet I see in your words you have accepted this as a very spiritual experience and in the inner growth of climbing another rung on the ladder to God............. wow! So beautiful, Krissie - just like you! Sheri
ReplyDeleteSheri, you are too sweet and kind. Dad's death was sad, yet one of the most beautiful things I've witnessed...he was ready, and right with his Maker. This is a very personal piece, and 'wandering the misty flats' was one of my Dad's favorite expressions. Thank you for reading, my friend.
DeleteBeautiful Krissie and so wonderful to remember your dad in such a warm way. My dad and I were real close, I still think of him often and he passed on 53 years ago this June. So good to see you on Whispers and read for you again. Robert
ReplyDeleteAnd it's so wonderful to see your comments again, my friend. Thank you for encouraging me. My Dad as a poet as well, and I believe he passed his talent down to me. I am most fortunate - he was an amazing father.
DeleteI really loved the pensive reflection in this poem. If the eyes are the window to the soul, how you have discovered peace and healing from a very poignant experience is reflected in this poem and shows you found it. A beautiful well written poem. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene
Charlene, I thank you for your kind words. I miss my Dad terribly, but I know he is at peace. He would always say he was 'wandering the misty flats', something he was told as a young boy. I thank you for taking the time to read. Love, Kristina
DeleteI can feel the emotions in these words of the loss, the longing and the love of one who has passed before. Well written and has me remembering my dad and what he meant to me. Janet
ReplyDeleteDads are rather special are they not? Well, most of them are, anyway. I was most fortunate to have such a loving, devoted father. I'm glad my poem touched you and brought memories back to you. Thank you for your lovely review. Kristina
DeleteDear Kristina,
ReplyDeleteIt is good to see so many wonderful comments on your poem dedicated to your father. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you, Karen. This looks like a lovely blog, and a wonderful way to share my love of poetry. Thank YOU, and blessings to you! Kristina
DeleteThank you, David Austin, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteThe title is great, leading to the other-worldly, a waking dream dimension. Love, Dave
Great work, Kristina. Your poem warmed my heart. My father passed away in 2012 and I miss him so much. Thank you for sharing this. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations
www.tgbtgpublictions.com
Maurice, thank you for your kind words. I am sorry about the loss of your Dad...it's never easy. The fact my poem warmed your heart is a huge compliment. Blessings to you. Kristina
DeleteDear Kristina -
ReplyDeleteOh how I know that quiet, foggy sense of loss and not quite intangible warmth of arms around the shoulders. It is a sad thing, this cycle. I'm sorry for your enormous loss.
love,
Kathy
Thank you, Kathy, for taking the time to read my poem, and comment. I like the way you describe it - 'quiet, foggy sense of loss'...indeed. Even though it's been 3 years, I still miss him so. Thanks again, Kristina
Deletea super read Kristina. I'm sure poetry can be passed down as a talent. Thank you for sharing your gift. warm regards Ralph.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ralph. I am very proud of the fact that I am my father's daughter - in many ways! My love of writing poetry, and my love of books. When I write I feel closer to my Dad, and yet, since his death, it's been very hard for me to write...Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Kristina
DeleteHello Kristina,
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem. Heartfelt and poignant. My Father passed away in 2009, but I think of him often. Sorry for your loss.
Shirley Smothers
Thank you so much, Shirley. I appreciate you taking the time to read, and comment. I am sorry for your loss as well...Kristina
DeleteGreat piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteThank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteDear Kristina--we are kindred spirits for I have written a number of poems involving misty moors. It is one of my favorite subjects!
Thank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful tribute to your late father! My father passed away December 1, 2012.
Suzanne Clement
Thank you, John Williams, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteI found your poem stimulating and soul touching.