My Favorite Place to Visit
By Jack Horne, England and Audrey Haick, United States
I wander through the town in which he lived,
Believe I feel his presence all around.
I visit places that he must have loved:
His childhood home, the church and New Place ground.
I lay a single rose upon his grave,
Sincerely wishing that he would appear;
I close my eyes and, smiling, think of him.
Ah, I love Stratford, home of Will Shakespeare.
On cold wintry days when my thoughts take flight
I‘m off to the great Pacific and her tropical lands
All exotic remnants of paradise in plain sight
How like footprints they seem upon the ocean, grand
Lush, vibrant green foliage and the richest colors ignite
As palms dance the Hula under a dazzling sun
Encircled by warm trade winds infusing daily delight
As four islands still evolving, offer us, endless fun!
(Note--The four Hawaiian Islands--Honolulu, Kauai, Maui and Oahu)
Wow, I love this poem with its resounding echoes and visuals. It's like walking into an ancient tomb which would be mindboggling, to say the least! The beautiful admiration for this poetic genius and writer exudes from your words to this reader and fills me with a nostalgic pang of knowing and wishing and dreaming.... a wonderful moment indeed! Sheri
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed reading this Sheri! Thank you very much!
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Thank you, Andrea Dietrich, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteIt was nice to see these two poets writing together. They have very contrasting views and descriptions for their favorite places, and I enjoyed each one!
Thank you for your kindness!
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Two such talented people so far from each other. Lovely cadence and the tropical visuals eased my frozen state. So deserving of tis special honor! Love, Lizzie
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind comment with the warm compliment, Lizzie.I am glad you enjoyed reading it,
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I really enjoyed a small glimpse into two different venues, emotionally as well as physically. Thank you for sharing both of your talents put together so well..
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Dear Charlene, I am glad that you enjoyed our poem. I thank you very much for reading it and the kind comment you've left!
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What a delightful and soul touching homage to one that is no longer with you and yet I felt as if he also walked with you both! Drawing us into view of his love of life and allowing us to know him just a little. A sweet ache and desire from this joint endeavor that captures the reader from the first sentence and leaves you wishing that you had walked in his shoes for even a single moment. Beautifully written! Congrats to both of you! Love Jane
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ReplyDeleteDear Jack and Audrey, you have written about two places I would love to visit. I can feel your passion throughout the poem and you painted images so clear and evocative. Perhaps these dreams will come true for all of us. What do you think? Should we plan a vacation together? Congratulations on a brilliant co-write! Much love to two of my best friends, Carolyn Devonshire
Thank you so much Carolyn! Yes, we should definitely make plans to do this together! That'll be double the fun! Talk to you soon!
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Audrey
Exdcellent craftmanship and great subject matter, congratulations on job well done.
ReplyDeleteYour imagery is really good and makes the reader want to stroll in Shakespeare's domain and wander the beaches of Hawaii. Robert
Thank you for your kind comment on our co-write, Robert. Glad that you enjoyed it!
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Beautifully done, both of you. I've never visited Shakespeare's home, but I have been to two of the Hawaiian Islands. I so loved reading this!
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Thank you so much for reading the poem, Pam, and I glad you enjoyed it!
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The first two verses touch me greatly, and remind me of visiting my the gravesites of my ancestors...in doing so, I felt a connection to them, and the verses speak to that connection, the love that never ends. The last two verses bring to mind my honeymoon - we visited those 4 islands of Hawaii. Wonderful memories came flooding back as I read the words. Great work together! Kristina
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading our poem, Kristina. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I am looking forward to reading some of yours soon!
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Jack and Audrey,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is great. I don't have a place I like visiting but this poem has made to start looking for it. Thanks for sharing.
Andrew Ntchindi Jere - Malawi
Thank you Andrew for taking your time to read our poem Yes, you should look for that place! It's exciting!
DeleteOld to current, not that Shakespeare is not current to this day. I have been to poet's corner at Westminster and felt the same overwhelming thoughts. Now the glory of Hawaii is on my list. Wonderful piece Jack and Audrey.
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Kathy
Thank you for reading this and your comment, Kathy. They would indeed be exciting places to visit!
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Audrey
Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--
ReplyDelete...thank Audrey for writing with me and also thank others for the kind comments they left
Dear Jack and Audrey,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem for Whispers and for all the encouraging comments you have left for other writers. You write well together. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing.
Blessings,
Karen
Painting pictures in the readers mind is indeed an art and you have both created wonderful thoughts to transpire into poetry. A pleasure to read. Take care always, Leokadia.
ReplyDeletea lovely duet of thought and emotio........and colour! An apt piece for a journey I am making with my daughter today: moving home/pastures new! best wishes Ralph.
ReplyDeleteJack and Audrey, what a very nice, delightful and descriptive poem. Nicely done. I truly enjoyed it.
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Two minds collaborated and produced a wonderful piece of art.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful melange of style, imagery... Terry
ReplyDeleteAh! how beautiful is the collaboration of the two at a distance, but united in imagery.
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