Today, I am happy to
showcase ninettes from Joann Grisett’s October 2015 Activity Column. She did a great job choosing the poems to
showcase. Thank you so much, Joann.
The criteria for the
form is (if you would like to try this form feel free to post your poems in the
comments section) --
The ninette starts with one syllable, then two, then three up to five, then decreases. Ninettes begin and end with the same syllable count for a total of nine lines.
The ninette starts with one syllable, then two, then three up to five, then decreases. Ninettes begin and end with the same syllable count for a total of nine lines.
Thank you, Joann
Grisetti, Kelley White, Charlene McCutcheon, and Emile Pinet for sharing your gifts of
words. There were so many creative poems, the choice of what to share wasn’t
easy. I am trying to feature different
poets for these columns so that everyone gets a chance to shine.
--Karen O’Leary, Whispers’ Editor
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life
too short
to worry
we are meant to
love wholeheartedly
someone special
each moment
before
death
By Joann Grisetti
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too short
to worry
we are meant to
love wholeheartedly
someone special
each moment
before
death
By Joann Grisetti
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dawn
lily
pond reflects
orange yellow red
autumn trees’ glory
so brilliant now
then fading
into
dusk
By Kelley White
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lily
pond reflects
orange yellow red
autumn trees’ glory
so brilliant now
then fading
into
dusk
By Kelley White
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lost
fearful
bewildered
anxious and praying
answers come slowly
as hope springs up
faith grows and
love is
fearful
bewildered
anxious and praying
answers come slowly
as hope springs up
faith grows and
love is
found
By Charlene McCutcheon
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By Charlene McCutcheon
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True
love is
the one thing
that changes you,
shaping who you are,
and yet does this
so subtly,
it don't
hurt.
By Emile Pinet
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love is
the one thing
that changes you,
shaping who you are,
and yet does this
so subtly,
it don't
hurt.
By Emile Pinet
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How enjoyable! Think I will try it. These are wonderful.
ReplyDeleteGreat examples for us. Thank you.
I enjoyed all of the ninettes--how fresh! I will try this form.
ReplyDeleteThe four ninettes are charming and all bring us the readers an important truth. I am not familiar with ninette form. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful ninettes.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed all these poems having great insight and good flow.
I am grateful to you for introducing me to this new genre, I wasn't aware of.
How wonderful! I love the shapes and the parts that form them <3 Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeleteA lovely collection!
ReplyDeleteStill a treasure to read once again. Thank you, Karen. Thank you Joann, Kelley, and Charlene. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Very nice, thanks Karen!
ReplyDeleteThese are fun!
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone, for your kind words for our talented artists. Celebrating the gifts of others is a joy.
ReplyDeleteBlessings to all,
Karen