The
First Time I Saw You
you
danced with lilacs scenting
the
spring air. Petunias and bluebells
clapped
their hands. Forsythia
and
red bud tangled in a clash
of
color. When you turned,
your
yellow hair shifted shoulders.
I thought
your eyes caught mine,
but
I couldn’t let you know
I
saw you seeing me. I thought,
who would look at this clod in the field?
I’m
uncool, except for hearing
poetry’s
music. This mistress
of
words holds me, yet denies
completeness.
But, in you I feel
poetry’s
promises. The brushings
of
your dress gives voice and image
to
lines crying for habitation. You
live
in these lines, after all these years,
as
from the first time I saw you.
Previously
Published in the July 2016 Issue of Episteme
Online Poetry Journal.
After
retiring from a 48-year career in the printing industry in 2013, Michael
Escoubas began writing poetry for publication. His study of and interest in
poetry goes back some 30 years. During this time he studied classical and
modern poets learning from their works and from critics who comment about them.
Michael writes poetry in part because his mother once said, “You have a gift
for words; you should do something with that gift.”
What a gorgeous love poem and I've enjoyed re-reading it again. It just flows and reading it at night is even more sensuous for some reason. You are a master of words, Michael.
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ReplyDeleteYour beautiful poem flows with color sounds music to an ending with love.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Michael. You are such a gifted writer and poet. I enjoyed "The First Time I Saw You" very much. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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How nicely have you introduce your beloved in a well crafted poetry whom you saw first time and still accompanying with you ?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Creation I have become a fan of your's.
How nicely have you introduce your beloved in a well crafted poetry whom you saw first time and still accompanying with you ?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Creation I have become a fan of your's.