Always…
I
will
be your
trusted friend,
always care for you.
I
will
walk your
path in life,
always there for you.
I
will
feel your
joys and hurts,
always share with you.
Richard Carl Subber (Rick) is a freelance editor, a writing coach and an amateur historian. He’s a former newspaper reporter/editor who transferred his love of language to more satisfying expressions. Rick is a proud grandpa who is patiently teaching his granddaughter how to write, in case there is poetry in her future. His blogs are: http://barleyliterate.blogspot.com/ and http://historybottomlines.blogspot.com/
Hi, Richard, and welcome to the halls of Whispers! It is pure joy reading all these newcomers and bask in their fine talents. Your poem is a wonderful pledge of love and a soulful promises to be a loyal and true friend. That is a very beautiful thing. I also love the humility within the words. Sheri
ReplyDeleteDear Rick,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you already have some wonderful thoughts from Sheri. I agree with her about your poem. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Please let me know if you have any questions. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Karen
Nice piece!
ReplyDeleteRick, welcome to Whispers! I truly appreciated your apt description of what true friendship is, in this well written, inspired poem. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us here on Whispers.
ReplyDeleteCharlene
This is beautiful, Rick! I love both the style and sweetness. So glad you've joined Whispers to share your gift. Blessings, Lisa
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for your encouragement! I expect to learn much from you and Whispers.
ReplyDeleteHi Richard. Welcome to Whispers. Thank you for the wonderful poetry you shared with us. I like the depth of passion in which "Always" holds. Thank you as well for sharing your gifts with Creative Inspirations. Continued blessings!
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Rick,
ReplyDeleteI love your series of fibonaccis you have presented here. It is so nice you are teaching your granddaughter to write, if she is anything like you, she will be an excellent poet someday, should she choose to continue to write. Welcome to Whispers!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Hello Richard,
ReplyDeleteI love your nice and beautifully weaved poem .
Frances
Thanks Rev. Reynolds and David and Frances, I'm grateful for your kind words and I look forward to reading your work here.
ReplyDeleteRick