Friday, March 20, 2015

Insignificant--By Peter Dome--United Kingdom

Insignificant

A tiny grain of sand in a endless desert
A single tear drop in a vast deep sea
A speck of dust in a whirlwind
A small candle flickering in a large city
A star so faraway in an unknown galaxy
A single second gone by in a thousand years
Symbolizes the loneliness I feel
Within me.

Hi, my name is Pete. I live in Sheffield, U.K. I hope you enjoy my poems. I look forward to reading yours. My best wishes. Pete.

18 comments:

  1. Therefore, your loneliness will be short lived!

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    1. Thank you so much Danny. hope so. take good care. Best wishes. Pete.

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    1. Thank you once again friend. Best wishes. Pete.

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  3. Oh, Pete, and so insignificantly - SIGNIFICANT! In that perspective it is indeed a sad and lonely place to be....... Sheri

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    1. Thank you so much Sheri, how nice to hear from you. hope you are keeping ok. my very best wishes. Pete.

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  4. A true perspective of loneliness Pete. It may seem insignificant to others at times, but loneliness can often seem like an endless desert to the person feeling it. You describe both so well. Thank you for sharing your talent.
    Charlene

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    1. Hi Carlene, so good to hear from you. sorry if you feel that way too at times. Wouldn't wish it on anyone.. Bless you. sending you my warmest best wishes. thank you take good care. Pete.

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    1. Thank you Peggy. So kind of you to stop by. take good care. best wishes. Pete.

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  6. Thank you Peter for sharing your heartfelt poem. Nicely written! Best wishes, Chris~

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind reply Christine. means a lot to me. you take care. Warm best wishes. Pete.

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  7. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. If it's autobiographical, you can't be lonely anymore. You have a Whispers family!!

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    1. Awe that's so sweet of you to say. I really appreciate your kind words. and what a great family this is. Please take care. My best wishes. Pete.

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  8. Loneliness is within the mind - I have felt it also Pete. Change is necessary as to how we think - we must become friends with ourselves bringing peace to our souls deep within...oxox Rhoda

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    1. Wow Rhoda what a profound and enlightening comment. thank you so much. Hope you are keeping ok. take good are. Best wishes. Pete.X.

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  9. This is a very nice poem, Peter. Thank you for sharing it and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. Thank you Maurice. Always a real pleasure to hear from you. hope you are well my friend. Best wishes. Pete.

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