blind date
call of a distant train
our loneliness
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oddly enough
loneliness
as refuge
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widowed neighbor
gospel songs as she
washes her car
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attractive neighbor
rebuilding her
Harley trike
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ayaz daryl nielsen is a husband, father, veteran, x-roughneck (as on oil rigs)/hospice nurse, editor of bear creek haiku (25+ years/120+ issues), homes include Lilliput Review, Jellyfish, Whispers, Shamrock, and! bearcreekhaiku.blogspot.com (translates as joie de vivre)
These are great ayaz, but then I always like what you write....best to you...
ReplyDeletePeggy, you just make me happy - and best to all your lovely creative endeavors
DeleteA lot to think about in this one, and a lot to enjoy. I identify with the sound of the distant train signifying loneliness. I think it is because we don't hear that far off train when we are with others. But, when alone, we hear it. Lonliness!
ReplyDeletethank you, Elizabeth, appreciate your words
DeleteWow, Ayaz, and life does go on no matter what happens. How poignant are your words! Sheri
ReplyDeleteand life goes on! always poignant! appreciating your comment, She Sta. . .
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery transcends in this poetic piece ayaz, life evolving as it does in so many delightful ways. Blessings always, Lee
ReplyDeleteHi ayaz. Love the haiku, especially the third one. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Enjoyed them all--especially 'widowed neighbor'
ReplyDeleteAyaz, thank you for once again sharing your amazing talent in these well written Haiku . I loved them all your especially widowed neighbor. Perhaps that is because gospel music sooths my weary soul at times too.
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