Silence
A gentle stroke of the brush
finishing up the painting that
will make anyone stand in silence.
One looks in awe, a second has
tears in her eyes; both not saying
a word....a breathtaking view to
be sure. "Well, what is that?"
inquires a third person, breaking
the silence. I guess he wasn't
listening.
Maurice J. Reynolds is a freelance writer who has had material published in various publications. He is the owner of To God be the Glory! Publications, a literary ministry that produces the poetry publication Creative Inspirations. More information can be found at: www.tgbtgpublictions.com.
Sometimes, silence is the best comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Elizabeth. Thank you for your comments. I agree. Sometimes silence is the best comment. -MJ
DeleteInteresting piece, I liked it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Peggy. Glad you enjoyed it. -MJ
DeleteHi Maurice, Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem. Silence is golden it's said! In many instances it is true! I enjoyed your poem! God bless, Chris~
ReplyDeleteHi Christine. I agree that silence is golden! Thank you for the encouragement. -MJ
DeleteMaurice, so much said in the brevity here. It is really quite amazing how each individual thoughts tend to vary and/or differ so greatly. You have a certain wisdom about you that shows so deeply in your writings. To me, this is a great write! Sheri
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sheri. I appreciate your comments and encouragement. -MJ
DeleteWow, Maurice this poem really touches the reader with great feeling. Robert
ReplyDeleteThank you, Robert. Glad you enjoyed it. -MJ
DeleteMaurice, I loved y9our wonderfully well written poem. Yes there is a time to speak and a time to be silent. Thank you for once again sharing your amazing talent.
ReplyDeleteCharlene .
Thank you, Charlene, for the wonderful encouragement. -MJ
DeleteSuch lovely thoughts composed Maurice, wonderful imagery lingers....Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Blessings always, Leokadia
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anielica. I appreciate your feedback and encouragement. -MJ
DeleteMeaningful sensitive words here in your poetry Maurice - always a joy to read you. Blessings to you...Rhoda
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rhoda. I appreciate your support and feedback. -MJ
DeleteMaurice - I just read you again gaining more understanding and meaning to your words. 'I love it' - no words that I could write can compare to my foregoing comment in quotes! Had to tell you this...Rhoda
DeleteThanks again, Rhoda. Your words and thoughts mean a lot to me. -MJ
DeleteWow! I love it. Especially that last part about not listening. You have to use all your senses when experiencing art or else you're not going to "get it." Excellent work here, Maurice!
ReplyDeleteHi Poppy. Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. -MJ
ReplyDeleteThank you, Eleanor Michael, for the following--
ReplyDeleteA poem about a painting and silence. On the second reading it spoke to me.
Eleanor
Hi Eleanor. Thank you for the wonderful feedback. I am glad you "felt" the poem. -MJ
DeleteThank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following--
ReplyDeleteDear Maurice,
Your poem, "Silence," proves people can see a portrait in a different vein from everyone else. When two people see it the same way, it's a masterpiece!
Thanks Gerald, my friend. Your thoughts are much appreciated. -MJ
Deleteah, so thought provoking, my friend : )
ReplyDeleteHello Jack. Thank you for the kind comments. -MJ
DeleteThank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following--
ReplyDeleteYou certainly show how different people can relate to the same piece of art in this poem.
Suzanne
Thank you, John Williams, for the following--
ReplyDeleteThe voice of your poetry is always soul-lifting... Glory be to God who creates for enjoyment soul waking pleasures of breathtaking beauty.
Thank you, John Polselli, for the following--
ReplyDeleteI'm struck by your gentle zen-like poem. Silence speaks volumes, and with this poem you've encapsulated that truth. Thanks for the experience, Maurice.
Thank you, Richard Sponaugle, for the following--
ReplyDeleteAs usual, Maurice writes a subtle, yet powerful poem with no wasted words. Very suspenseful.
Thank you, Barbara Siekierski, for the following--
ReplyDeleteA good poem to remind us of what God has created by his hands. Look around at the breath taking view and remember where it came from.