Saturday, March 1, 2014

Etched Glass of Symbols--By Rhoda Galgiani--United States

Etched Glass of Symbols

Magic swirls within the view of one's eye
as delicate ribbons twist and turn elegantly,
eyes that seek truth above and beyond the filters
beyond the camouflage, beyond their hidden hues

Mysteries engulf the mind as the waves send
messages fulfilling the desires of the invader,
penetrating the private hollows of the hidden
as brilliant mental images lost - rise

Mentally saturated by images of depth
showered by the invasion of a brains space,
our electric vision overtakes their moments
creating our own etched glass of symbols

May we question, what we have seen
as we intrude upon another souls mind,
hidden secrets or shallowly hidden grief?
No I say, hidden glory of life that is to be –

as an invasive mind is silenced

Rhoda Galgiani is a published Poet and Author of two books, Expressions from the Inside Out and No Snow for Johnny, A Child’s Story. Rhoda is a retired senior that delights in maintaining her own website entitled Expressions Poetry Journal, established in 2009, which is dedicated to the world of poetry and the love of animals. You may view her work on her website at chesakat1.blog.com

27 comments:

  1. Wow, Rhoda, so many thing come to mind as I read your posting. I wonder, at times, when we should speak up and I wonder at times why we remain silent........ that is only one thought that comes to my mind as I read this poem. Reminds me, too, of the quote, ...... "people who live in glass houses" ............ so, you see, your poem is a mind stunner, to be sure! Much depth, much soul has gone into your words and I will be anxious to read others' comments going forth. Very deep! Sheri

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  2. Wow Rhoda, that poem is so deep and my mind wants to read it over and over like one looking through a kaleidoscope and seeing so many different patterns but each beautiful. This poem would surely be winner in a contest. It is a winner in my book.
    Thank you for sharing your awesome talent here on Whispers.
    Love, Charlene

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  3. Dear Rhoda,
    I love the way you describe how we can never be sure our interpretation of another's images or words are the same as they intended to be. This is highly creative as I've never seen a poem on this topic before, but it certainly deserves some thought and attention. We all see things differently, yet I feel this thought-provoking poem has a unique message and it came through very clearly for me. Brilliant, my friend! Love, Carolyn

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  4. Sheri, Charlene and Carolyn - Thank you so much for your comments. This is one of my moments of mystery - a moment of becoming lost in the uncertainty of what is around one. Each of us will gain their own unstanding of my words - thus the world continues to spin...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  5. Another well-written and fruitful poem, Rhoda. It really is a pleasure being able to enjoy the words of your pen. I really enjoyed this poem, especially the third stanza. A lot to admire and meditate upon. Thanks for sharing and continued blessings! -MJ

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  6. Dear Rhoda I can feel your heart and soul in this amazing poetic piece. Sometimes we can place our trust in someone not worthy of our kind nature. Your words speak volumes and this is a wonderful presentation of poetry. Blessings always, Leokadia

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  7. The mind itself is a mystery that is filled with ever more mystery... exciting poem... Terry

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  8. Dear Rhoda,

    A well written, thought provoking poem. The mystery our minds and others can indeed lead us to uncertainty at times. Thank you for sharing this with us and thank you always for your kind comments.

    Love Sandra

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  9. Thank you Maurice, Anielica, Terry and Sandra for sharing your thoughts with me on this poetry. A bit dramatic, but I think my words express what I feel on the subject. Sometimes one's own secrets are just that - one's owns! Another should not dig too deeply into another's soul...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  10. Thanks for the comment and visit. Your compliment tugs my heart...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  11. Dear Rhoda,

    Thank you for all the support and encouragement you give others here at Whispers. You comments are greatly appreciated. What a blessing you are!

    Karen

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  12. Thanks Karen - been busy all week. I see I have some reading to do...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  13. Rhoda -

    Would that I could understand every meaning woven into this beauty. My electric brain is wandering.

    love,
    Kathy

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  14. Hi Kathy - I don't quite understand your comment, but you referred to my poetry as a 'beauty', so I feel you enjoyed my efforts. Yes, wander - for each reader will come to their own conclusion by my words. Thank you so much for reading me...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  15. Thank you, Robert, Dufresne, for the following comment--

    There is much depth of thought to this poem in my opinion, Rhoda. I liked especially the second and third verses. An intriguing look at the mysteries af the mind. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

    Bob D

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  16. Thank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following comment--

    Dear Rhoda--"Etched Glass of Symbols" is indeed deep, for the human mind is the deepest entity in the universe. Outer space or inner space, which is deeper?

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  17. Thank you, Eleanor Michael, for the following comment--

    An interesting poem--shades and images. A decision made.

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  18. Thank you Robert for your supportive comment. I went back and re-read the 2nd and 3rd verses and yes the mind is very mysterious for all of us. Your comment is special indeed...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  19. Gerald - thank you for the visit - I absolutely love your question - 'Outer space or inner space, which is deeper?' I think we will have a draw on that one - but with the outer space' at least we can come upon some visual answers on occasion. With the mind many time it is like entering a 'black hole' - ya know???...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  20. Thank you Eleanor for the comment and interest in my poetry. I appreciate you taking the time to post your input and support...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  21. I love your work Rhoda, you truly are a great writer, clearly with a lot of talent and intelligence. very well done. you always leave me inspired. take care best wishes. Pete.

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  22. Thank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following comment--

    The mind is certainly powerful, and where would we be without it?

    Suzanne Clement

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  23. Peter - I can't thank you enough for your 'delicious' comment. I am full of joy tonight because of your truly huge heart and compliments...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  24. Thank you Suzanne for your comment - yes, such a wonderful question that I can answer with a simple 'duh' to all that surrounds us - for that is where we would be...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  25. Thank you, John Williams, for the following comment--

    Your poetry is always a pleasure.The moods created by your work is penetrating. Thanks for sharing it.

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  26. A comment like yours John is so rewarding. Thank you for taking the time to read me - your thoughts make it all worth while...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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