Christmas Eve
Ready for the party,
Daddy in a Santa suit,
Momma in a fur-trimmed Mini.
They know the kids
are listening to every word.
“Have been good?” he asks.
He names them one by one,
“Holly, Angel, Carol, Noel.”
Although it’s not always true,
she says, “Yes, yes, yes, and yes.”
“Then there is something
in my backpack for every one.”
He leans toward Mrs. Santa,
“What should I bring
their mother for Christmas?”
“Sorry, Santa,” she says,
“four small socks hanging
on the mantel is enough.”
Eleanor Michael has published poetry and short stories in a variety of venues.
Loved your poem Eleanor! Those final lines did it for me! Joyful season's greetings to you! // paul
ReplyDeleteThis brought a big smile today, Eleanor.
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteCute, Eleanor! A fun read! Sheri
ReplyDeleteyou made me smile
ReplyDeleteLoved the names and loved this poem! Very clever and enjoyable read Eleanor. Blessings for the holidays, Connie
ReplyDeleteEleanor,
ReplyDeleteSuch a great poem with a clever ending! I remember your poetry in SMILE!
Your friend,
David Fox
Hi Eleanor. Thank you for the warm and tender "Christmas Eve." Right on time before Christmas day in a few more days. I enjoyed it. Continued blessings!
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Thank you, everyone, for the wonderful comments on Eleanor's delightful poem. I will send them to her. Eleanor, it is a joy to share your gift for words here at Whispers. You are so talented my friend. Thank you for your ongoing support and encouragement.
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Karen