October Is No Lady
By Pam Murray
Come softly to my window.
Dawn rises and you’ll see
October’s inspiration
In the changing tapestry.
I envy her the weaving
Of such vibrant red and gold.
I’ve tried to emulate her
But I’m never quite so bold.
I’ve heard she is a mistress
Of old man winter who will be
Along to do her bidding,
Which he’ll do most willingly.
Some think it is the summer
Who would hold her in his bed.
Perhaps it’s just the sun who tries
To keep her close instead.
I know she’s not a lady.
Just look at what she flaunts.
It really is quite scandalous
How she teases and she taunts.
But we’ve learned to love her.
We await her eagerly
As soon as summer passes.
What fools we mortals be.
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From the editor--It is a privilege to announce that Pam Murray is December’s Poet of the Month. She is an accomplished writer who has been published in a variety of venues. Readers at Whispers enjoy her wonderful poetry. Pam has been an encouraging voice at our online journal since 2013. She regularly leaves thoughtful comments which others appreciate. Pam has collaborated with another writer on several poems that have been featured at Whispers. It is a pleasure to present Pam with this honor!
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Thoughts on “October is No Lady”--I felt the gentle invitation in the opening line and was drawn to find out what was out there to see. Pam’s skilled use of personification evokes an artistic experience. The rhyme flows effortlessly which is a hallmark of much of Pam’s writing. The imagery breathes life into this remarkable poem. This is a wonderful, timeless piece.
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Congratulations and thank you Pam! I appreciate all you do and have done for Whispers.
Sincerely,
Karen O’Leary, Editor
Pam,
ReplyDeleteWow!! Enjoyed reading your personification of the seasons..Very naughty are they..
Sara
Thank you so much Sara. I love the various seasons and got the inspiration for this poem as our weather fluctuated between warm and cold.
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You have captured a month.. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteThank you Joan. I feel very honoured and love sharing my work with readers.
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I get caught by her beauty every year...then... Nice work, Pam
ReplyDeleteThere is always so much colour in Autumn. I got the idea of her flirting with the fluctuation of temperatures.
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Not only do I love her, I would follow her to the ends of the earth...
ReplyDeleteThis poem is lyrical gold. I love, love, love it .. Myke
Thank you so much Myke. I love, love, love sharing it with readers.
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Hi Pam! I enjoyed this lovely poem in which you display an adapt hand at painting with imagery and making excellent use of personification. Very artistic. Congrats on being chosen as Poet of the Month! // paul
ReplyDeleteThank you Paul. I consider it a very big honour to be chosen from among so many talented poets.
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Pam,
ReplyDeleteA very finely crafted poem. I liked it a lot. Congratulations on being December's featured poet!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thank you David. I am quite touched to have been chosen.
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Nicely done,congratulations Pam
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angelee from India
Dear Pam, Congratulations on being honored as poet of the month, a well deserved honor. I really enjoyed the wonderful personification of the seasons fall and winter. Such an interesting write. Thank you for sharing your talent and time with all of us here on Whispers.
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Congratulations on your well deserved Poet of the Month Pam! It was a joy reading this delightful and unique poem about the Fall season. When October rolls around each year I am in heaven. You already know what a huge fan I am of your poetry and I am happy others are able to enjoy it too. Have a lovely white Christmas Pam! Blessings, Connie
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