power cut -
the snowflakes pair off
for a dance
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old watercolour -
a dripping tear
makes the difference
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ice fishing -
the wind bites
first
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squally words-
your breath
spotting the night
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high snow-
a starling pecking
the door bell grain
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Lavana Kray is from Iasi – Romania. She is passionate about writing and photography. The nature and the events of her life are topics of inspiration. She believes that there is a core of poetry in all things. Both haiku and haiga have been published in: Haiku Canada Review, Asahi Shimbun, The Mainichi, World Haiku Association, Daily Haiga, Word Haiku Review, Haiku Presence and others… She was chosen for Haiku Euro Top 100-edition 2013. This is her blog: http://photohaikuforyou.blogspot.ro
I particularly like your middle haiku 'ice fishing - the wind bites first'. Wonderful image.
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lovely write, especially the breath spotting the night!
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Friendly hug,
Lavana
Lavana, I enjoyed your haiku. I was reminded of the first time I went ice fishing. You captured the winter season beautifully. Thanks. Ron Grognet
ReplyDeleteDear Ron, I wish you a windless ice fishing ! :)
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Lavana, I loved all your Haiku, but especially the one about ice fishing because it reminded my of my dear Dad who loved fishing so much that he would tolerate any weather to fish and I have pictures of him sitting on the ice at a near by lake where he used to live, sitting so patiently for the fish to bite. It was of course very cold but he dressed like a eskimo and enjoyed every minute. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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Dear Charlene, I wrote this haiku in my father's memory too.
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Hug,
Lavana
Lovely work, thanks for sharing!
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Have a happy new year !
These are wonderful, thanks for writing them.
ReplyDeleteYou are very kind, Joan. Thank you. I am glad you like them:)
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