Monday, December 8, 2014

November Dreams--By Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo--Philippines

November Dreams

Acrobatic leaves
fatigued, drop to earth below.
Calmly, they rest jam-pack-like.

Trees beheaded bold
while meteor-like streaks fall.
They hug the trunks with cold-fire.

Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo, 28 year-old from The Philippines, is a nurse by profession. Poetry writing is her new found hobby, since 2012. She is a member of Poetry Soup where she submits most of her poems. Her writing inspiration is driven by God, experiences and nature. She dreams of publishing a book someday.
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10 comments:

  1. CharleneDecember 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM

    Olive, it is so nice to see this well written poem you have shared with us here on Whispers. I loved your description of autumn leaves; a perfectly unique description as well as the beheaded trees and the ice at their trunks. With poetry like you have written here I have no doubt you will write a great poetry book. Thank you for sharing your talent with us on Whispers.
    Love, Charlene

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    1. UnknownDecember 8, 2014 at 8:10 PM

      thanks Charlene.. :) I appreciate your comment.. :) God bless you.. :)!

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  2. Karen O'LearyDecember 8, 2014 at 3:52 PM

    Dear Olive,

    It's good to see you already have one lovely and encouraging comment on your artistic poem. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  3. UnknownDecember 8, 2014 at 8:12 PM

    Thanks much Karen,.. :) I am happy that you consider this worthy to be posted here.. :)! Im looking forward to post some more soon.. :)!

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  4. paul callusDecember 9, 2014 at 8:46 AM

    Hi Olive_eloi!! So pleased to see this beautiful poem of yours on Whispers! Love your descriptive ability. Looking forward to read more poems of yours. God bless. // paul

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  5. UnknownDecember 10, 2014 at 1:40 PM

    thanks much Paul.. :) Stay blessed too. :)!

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  6. UnknownDecember 12, 2014 at 3:39 PM

    Hello, Olive! I like how you've given the fallen leaf its own distinct personality and experience! Very clever! Sheri

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  7. Lotus2009December 16, 2014 at 10:08 PM

    Beautifully written Olive. This unique poem is outstanding in its diversity. Happy holidays to you and yours, Connie

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  8. UnknownDecember 18, 2014 at 2:19 PM

    Olive,
    As one who is completing a children's poetry chapbook, it is not that hard, a lot of companies are more than happy to find an illustrator for you and even pay you, if
    that's the route you are going for. If not, buy the Writer's market (if it's available where you live) and start researching companies. On-line companies can work with you too, if you've got the cash, there more than happy to help!
    Your new friend,
    David Fox

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  9. AnonymousDecember 22, 2014 at 11:49 AM

    Hi Olive. Welcome to Whispers and thank you for sharing "November Dreams." The image you paint of the leaves is splendid. Continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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