Seeds of Hope
Sunsets shadows
setting still
scattered seeds
in hope fulfill
setting still
scattered seeds
in hope fulfill
Serendipitous
fate unknown
colourful hues
in breezes blown
fate unknown
colourful hues
in breezes blown
Left in faithful
expectation
natures capricious
fascination
expectation
natures capricious
fascination
Fleeting flights
of fantasy
tranquil fields
silent reverie
of fantasy
tranquil fields
silent reverie
Sunlit visions
wondrous scene
verdant meadows
forever green.
wondrous scene
verdant meadows
forever green.
Allan Ball is retired, most of career was spent in the
fiscal and financial world. He has several poems published in anthologies. He
finds writing relaxing and enjoyable. He feels that the
written word allows our hearts to speak.
Dear Allan
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Whispers!
And thank you for this excellent debut poem; I look forward to more. Your opening stanza is compelling accentuated by a strong "s" alliteration sequence.
Blessings,
Michael
Hello Michael , Thank You for taking the time to read and comment on my debut poem . I am thrilled by your most positive reaction . Regards Allan .
DeleteDear Allan,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you already have some wonderful thoughts from Michael on your poem. The alliteration is something that drew me in, too. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us.
Blessings,
Karen
Dear Karen , I am most grateful to you for accepting my poem . I am delighted by your
ReplyDeletecomment . I look forward to becoming an active member of Whispers in the future .
Kind Regards Allan .
Dear Allan,
DeleteI look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank you for your lovely thoughts. Enjoy Whispers!
Karen
Welcome to Whispers, Allan. Thank you for the "Seeds of Hope;" a beautiful poem. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Hello Maurice. Thank you for your welcome and your lovely
Deletecomment. I am most grateful to be a part of Whispers .
Wonderful alliterations ..simply and laconically saying volumes..may all seeds of hope grow and fill your awesome heart with warmth and serenity. .Amen..blessing dearest :)
ReplyDeleteClytemnestra As . Such a delightful reaction , your very kind words are so inspirational . Thank You So Much .
DeleteBlessings . Allan .
Allan,
ReplyDeleteA really great poem. Welcome to Whispers!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Hello David . Thank you for your warm welcome to Whispers . I am most
Deletegrateful for your very kind words . Hopefully I will be able to write more poems
that I can share . Once again thank you . Allan .